Comments | lynnez59: BSG fic: Long Day (for girlsavesboy ficathon)

lynnez59

BSG fic: Long Day (for girlsavesboy ficathon)

Oct 10, 2011 18:59

Title: Long Day
Rating: PG-13ish
Characters: Sharon Agathon and Sam Anders with mentions of other crew members
Summary: After this week, all she wants is a drink. (Set at the end of the The Son Also Rises, so there be spoilers for anything before that)
A/N: This was written for thegirlsavesboy ficathon. It's not at all what I intended to write so this was done ( Read more... )

character: sam anders, fic: battlestar galactica, girl saves boy, character: athena

Comments 12

korenap October 11 2011, 04:27:56 UTC

I really enjoyed this. It felt very true to Athena and Sam and ironically brought Kara to life as well.

lynnez59 October 11 2011, 14:43:20 UTC

Thank you so much. I was really worried about my Sam voice. I'm glad it sounded authentic

rose_griffes October 11 2011, 23:39:48 UTC

I really like this; your characterization for both Sam and Sharon felt right, and you definitely made me feel for Sam in this situation.

lynnez59 October 12 2011, 14:39:19 UTC

Thank you. I'm so glad the characters are coming off right. Thanks again for commenting

beatrice_otter October 12 2011, 21:45:05 UTC

Nice.

lynnez59 October 12 2011, 22:49:23 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting.

lizardbeth_j October 14 2011, 15:46:55 UTC

Aw, poor bb Sharon. Y'know, I think fandom really underestimates how damn HARD it must've been for her. Like, as soon as she gets a callsign people think "oh, she's accepted". but then it's pretty clear in the mutiny that, no, actually, people are maybe tolerating her, but that's it. (like Racetrack, the mutiny shows IMO that she never actually thought Sharon was a friend).

And I love that Sam comes to help her and then she has to help him back! I've always really liked the idea of their friendship though we didn't see much of it besides the hug on NewCap.

lynnez59 October 14 2011, 18:11:57 UTC

Thank you for reading. I wish we had gotten more about her transition from prisoner to officer and how she has to fight to be accepted. I was always curious about the friendship after that hug scene. It could be an interesting parallel to the friendship between Kara and Karl

daybreak777 October 15 2011, 09:09:36 UTC

I liked this. It felt like a little slice-of-life moment from Sharon Agathon whose perspective we didn't often get on screen.

lynnez59 October 16 2011, 12:52:26 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked it.