LOCI fanfic - All Shiny and New

Jun 21, 2011 18:45


Title: All Shiny and New
Disclaimer: I make no profit and have no money to sue for anyway.
Rating: R

A/N: This picks up immediately after Loyalty

A/N2: This is a bit out of my comfort zone and experimental style wise (for me) so constructive criticism is welcome...just play nice please.

A/N3: Thank you to Daystarsearcher for the beta help : )

And she wonders if she didn't just throw everything important to her away... )

loci fanfic, goren & eames

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basric June 22 2011, 00:23:45 UTC
I Loved this. LOVED this. Great job.

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lynnez59 June 22 2011, 14:53:41 UTC
Thank you!! I'm glad someone liked it...and a non shipper to boot. :)

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lynnez59 June 23 2011, 11:33:15 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you got such a spectrum of emotions from it.

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ffrmusicwench June 23 2011, 23:36:57 UTC
Glad to see you writing again. I just love Goren and Eames and all their angst!

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lynnez59 June 24 2011, 21:08:43 UTC
Oh I've been writing, just not finishing LOL. Thanks for reading. I was pretty happy with how this turned out.

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howarethosenuts June 24 2011, 05:57:30 UTC
Love. Love. Love.

Thank you for a happy ending!

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lynnez59 June 24 2011, 21:09:32 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and there will always be a happy ending for these two as far as I'm concerned

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letsallchant June 24 2011, 22:39:42 UTC
"Eames, this--"

"God, just get your pants off."

haha, that's our Eames! (and so them)

That was so great, I really enjoyed reading it - I feel like it encapsulates everything I love about them. This one is definitely going into my favorites <3

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lynnez59 June 25 2011, 13:33:47 UTC
Thank you so much!

I feel like it encapsulates everything I love about them.
--this made my day <3

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