Comments | lynnez59: Law and Order 100 Challenge: Regret

lynnez59

Law and Order 100 Challenge: Regret

Dec 29, 2008 19:37

Title: 16 Years
Flavor: Criminal Intent
Rating: PG-13
Words: 115 (I cut it as much as I could)

( 16 Years )

alex eames, 100 challenge, bobby goren

Comments 13

nerca_beyul December 30 2008, 05:59:42 UTC

Aw, youch. Poor Alex.

lynnez59 December 30 2008, 17:21:43 UTC

Yeah, i know...hey they pretty much asked for angst in the challenge, though. lol. thanks for the feedback

havers December 30 2008, 10:18:34 UTC

Oh no...very sad...but I like that he holds her instead...

lynnez59 December 30 2008, 17:22:01 UTC

thanks. hope it wasn't too angsty

untapdtreasure December 30 2008, 11:55:21 UTC

that...wow. I can so totally see that. very powerful in those 115 words! meming!

lynnez59 December 30 2008, 17:23:43 UTC

thanks. Ever since I saw the episode where the abortionist is killed I've thought she at some point had an abortion. I just had to take that extra sappy step...lol

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lynnez59 December 30 2008, 17:24:00 UTC

thank you!

justanotherfic January 1 2009, 20:45:15 UTC

I always imagined she'd had an abortion (after watching The Third Horseman). I like the way you wrote it - some people write it so that she has the abortion after Joe's died, but I like this much more! Great work!

lynnez59 January 1 2009, 21:08:18 UTC

thanks so much! I always thought the same thing after seeing "The Third Horseman" -- it was kinda hard not to, don't you think? It was really the first purely emotional response we saw from Eames.