[Fanfic] - X-Ray Vision and the Strength of Five Gorillas (2/2)

[lynne_monstr]

Comments

[vampirenaomi]

This was even better than the first chapter, and that's saying a lot! The first scene with Germany and the other Prussia was one of the most amazing and heart-breaking things I have read in a long time. I absolutely loved how worried and angry Germany was since he thought Prussia had been hurt. And the other Prussia totally broke my heart here, especially when Germany told him that he wasn't his brother. The angst in this scene was perfect. And the explanation scene totally cracked me up. My favourite kind of Hetalia stories are those that can balance between angst and humour so that neither overshadows the other, and this story managed it fantastically

[lynne_monstr]

Thank you so much! As someone whose writing I really admire, it means a lot to get such a wonderful comment.

I have a long history of reading/watching/loving science fiction, and in every doppelganger or clone storyline, the duplicate almost always ends up with nothing (which is really sad if you use the viewpoint that memories, not physiology, define a person), so I really wanted to write something that took the opposite track.

[psanon]

Oh man. Where do I even start? I'm still full of feelings and just, ugh, everything hit right in the heart.
Gosh, I am just this ball of incoherency right now but gosh--- I just want to thank you for writing such an amazing fic (and omg, this is my OTP so double points for you) and holy shit, let me love you?

[lynne_monstr]

Thanks!! You definitely get props for a Prussia/Prussia OTP! (I wish it wasn’t so rare)

Also, love in the form of wild Prussia flailing is always accepted here :)

[kiramaru7]

WOW! That like Prussia was awesome!! I really hope you'll add to it as I just LOVED this!!

[lynne_monstr]

Thanks!! (no lie - the only thing better than one Prussia is two!)

Not sure if I'll ever write more for it, but who knows...

[kiramaru7]

You're welcome! (*laughs* Oh yeah!! ;p)

Okay... if you do, great! If not, that's okay too! :D

[lilith_kisaragi]

You know... when I found this in the hetalia comm I started reading, and, while I was doing so, I couldn't stop thinking how perfectly done it was, how in character Prussia was and how awesome was everything overall, I was totally astonished. Then, I read it was yours and suddenly everything made sense.

I could talk a lot about this, but, you know, vampirenaomi said almost exactly what I thought, so, just... girl, you are amazing, honestly, your Prussia fics would never stop to amaze me.

Just. Superb.

[lynne_monstr]

Aw, thanks so much! I’m so glad that you enjoyed it :) Prussia is too much fun to write, and I had a good time having him interact with himself.

Amazing

[anonymous]

Perfect characterization times two, and Prussia in double quantity is my idea of heaven, so hats off to you. <3

Re: Amazing

[lynne_monstr]

Aw, thanks!! What can I say, the only thing better than one prussia is two!