Cold (Bret Mckenzie/Jemaine Clement, RPS)

[lye]

Pairing(s) in the story: Bret Mckenzie/Jemaine Clement, RPS
Author Name/Pen Name: Lye
Author LJ Name: lyeDisclaimer: I don't own Flight of the Conchords, they own themselves, and in my dreams they own each other

Comments

[lye]

I can definitely see what you mean, dude. Thanks for the feedback!

[lordstarfish]

I really like how he tells him he loves him before the kiss. Usually it's the other way around, but it seems more realistic that way, now that you've written it. & that last line was absolute love ♥ :)

[lye]

Thanks, love <3

[she_burns1]

There are lots of little bits and pieces that I love in this story.

I can't quite nail them all down, but I know I really like how Jemaine tells him he loves him and then immediately apologizes for it. For some reason I just really love that.

And there was a lot in here that just stood out - it was easy for me to imagine this, to see it in my head playing out like a movie. A movie that I would certainly like to see more than once! *saves stories to faves*

I wanted to tell you all this on AIM, but you're not on! :(

Oh well, maybe tomorrow!

[lye]

Aww, thank you. I will try to be on later from work, after dinner timeish!

[ballroombubble]

I saw this and thought, 'yay, lye posted fic again!'

Then I read it and thought, 'YAY! IT'S AS AWESOME AS I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE!'

[lye]

Aw you are too sweet. GET POSTING SOME FIC.

[ocd_pixie]

I really liked this. It felt quite understated, in a way that made it realistic and easy to imagine while I was reading it. There are many little bits I could pick out, but I'd only end up quoting half your story back to you! So yes, gorgeous fic :)

[lye]

Thank you, sweetie. I'm glad you liked it.