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Mar 20, 2010 11:07

Fic for genfic_minis.

Title: Conversation, One and One
Words: About 850
Rating: G
Setting: Sometime during the time Giles and Anya owned the Magic Box.
Prompt: for laucus who wanted Anya, a soft drink, a revelation.

I hope this is okay; whenever I write Anya she tends to take over the scenario.

Conversation, One and One )

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brutti_ma_buoni March 20 2010, 18:47:46 UTC
Hee! Two worlds that don't collide at all. I loved Anya using Giles's embarrassment to get herself a good bonus, and you do a great job of the general shop-talk that they do have in common.

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lycomingst March 21 2010, 01:08:10 UTC
Thanks, I can't help but think they had talks like this every time they had to go over the books. 8 ]

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laucus March 20 2010, 20:19:27 UTC
Giles and Anya's mutual snark was amongst my favourite parts of the latter seasons, and you've captured it quite admirably here! Thank you for writing the prompt, and again for making it nice and fun.

I like seeing this sort of (semi)friendly banter. Anya's brutal 'honesty' about Giles's age (never mind her own eleven hundred years) was amusing, as well as her final line--it's probably true, too xD And Giles trying to be polite whilst dealing with her is quite cute.

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lycomingst March 21 2010, 01:10:56 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. It's always difficult for me for not to let Anya take over things. My first version had Anya doing all the talking and Giles saying things like "Really?". 8 ]

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louise39 March 20 2010, 21:46:59 UTC
"Are you going to tell me a boring story about your life?"
Tee Hee.

'Unlikely partnership' is a pleasure to read. The young/old ex-demon capitalist and ever polite British watcher/store owner.

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lycomingst March 21 2010, 01:16:17 UTC
Thanks. They're both fun to write; both of them want to talk all the time. 8 ]

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buffyangellvr23 March 21 2010, 03:18:49 UTC
nice work :) You captured them well.

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lycomingst March 21 2010, 20:23:23 UTC
Thanks! 8 ]

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lycomingst March 21 2010, 20:23:48 UTC
Thanks! 8 ]

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