A Lesson A Day (could kill you)... Part 10

[lycaness]

Jensen wiped his hands on his jeans again, the nervous sweat gathering there refused to go away.  He knew it was late but he could hear male and female laughter on the other side of the door and he figured Sandy was probably there.  Great, that was going to make things more difficult if she decided to play guard dog.

Finally the door opened and a

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[garvaldmains]

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

*is ded*

[lycaness]

LMAO.
Well, I kinda fixed them for you. :)

[unrequited666]

If I were Jared, I would've made Jensen work for it... not just invite him inside...

And then they were sort of together but he hadn't officially ended it with Danneel yet... If I were Jared, I would've waited til things were officially ended and then on top of that made Jensen work for it... *grins*

[lycaness]

Yeah, but Jared doesn't have a mean bone in his body. He may freak out occasionally but that's not the real him,

Jensen is still with Danneel, technically, but... well you'll see. :)
There's no way Jared could wait, he's missed Jensen too much. He's found the strength to do something about it and if he didn't use it there and there he may never have found it again.

[samantha890]

Oh poor Jared... *sniffs*

[wednesday_d]

I reached halfway through this chapter and I really didn't remember how much there was left, so I went back to the Master Post and I think my heart kind of failed me for a moment when I saw I had another ten chapters to go, mainly because I thought things would easily work out now...But God, I know my heart will get crushed and I honestly can't wait to see how they'll cope with everything!

This fic is amazing, not easy to read, but amazing. I don't have a problem reasing about non-con and rape, it's far from pleasant but it's not difficult. What it extremely difficult to read and so very frustrating is Jensen's lack of control when it comes to Daneel. I really can't see how now, but I hope beyond hope that next chapter he will finally stand up to her and get rid of her...I really have trouble accepting Jensen is so weak, but honestly, you've done a great job with charcterisations!

[lycaness]

Lol, this story really did get long didn't it? It was my first ever BB and I really don't think I understood what a huge undertaking that would be, and I also didn't realise just how hard my muse would work at giving me more and more storyline and subplots.

I totally get what you're saying about Jensen. I really wish I'd had more time to cover what Jensen went through with Danneel, there was a whole past story thing going on there but with everything going on with Jared and I just didn't have the time to put in everything I wanted to. If I had done that Jensen being under Danneel's thumb might have made more sense.

This story was literally finished in the last hour, me writing my friend betaing as soon as I finished a part and them post straight away. I didn't even sleep that night getting it all done and posted, it was so hectic. Still, as my first BB I was happy (mostly) with how it turned out and I hope you can forgive the issue... and my god this reply ended up longer than I expected, lol.

[awen_1]

Am glad they could be this close, but it's really cruel what that man did to Jared that he couldn't come without being told to. I hope this changes with Jensen's love!

[lycaness]

Oh the man that did this to Jay did so many bad things, the guy is the devil incarnate! I still wonder how messed up I am to have thought him up in the first place. well they do say that love conquers all.