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lycaness

Deadline on Love 10/13

Sep 16, 2009 22:57

Title: Deadline on Love 10/13
Paring: Jensen/Jared
Rating: NC-17 overall
Beta: The always amazing engel82 for keeping me going and helping to sort out my muddled brain. The lifesaver
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jenackles82 September 16 2009, 22:29:31 UTC

Ahh you can't leave it there. I'm glad Sherri figured out that Jensen's mom was abusing him! I can't wait for more.

I'm addicted to this.

lycaness September 24 2009, 09:13:03 UTC

Haha, oh yes I can, I'm the author, I can do anything I want. *gets a big head* Lmao. sorry, went a little crazy there for a second.
Sherri is a smart women when she wants to be, shame she didn't use her brain a little more in the beginning.
Thank you. *hugs*

jennygeee September 16 2009, 22:29:52 UTC

Awww this is coming to an end? Really good chapter, love the way Jared's mum came to the rescue!! Oh and Chad's got a lot of making up to do.....maybe you need to write another 10 chapters to clear it all up :D :D
xx

lycaness September 24 2009, 09:14:20 UTC

Everything has to end some time, I'm sorry, but there will actually be a total of 13 chapters now, it got longer, lol.
Chad, well, we'll see if he can redeem himself.
Thank you *hugs*

stacyleanne September 16 2009, 22:45:09 UTC

Mike, really? And all this time I was thinking it was Tom.

Now Jensen can get his revenge and hopefully a happy ending? Aha.

lycaness September 24 2009, 09:15:10 UTC

Yep, really. I'm glad you thought it was Tom, you were supposed to. :D
Happy ending? Hm, maybe, you'll see. ;)
Thank you. *hugs*

anifsemaj September 16 2009, 22:47:18 UTC

Love that Sherri
a) apologized for not listening to Jared.
b) took Jared's word that he was with Jensen so Jensen couldn't have attacked Megan.
ad last but not least c) figured out that Jensen's mom was the one that abused him.

Once she acknowledged that she should have listened to Jared in the first place, she was obviously reviewing everything Jared had said about Jensen & came to some interesting conclusions. Wonderful job!

lycaness September 24 2009, 09:17:43 UTC

She was yes, just think, if Jared was with Jensen the whole time, she must know that Jared would never hurt Jensen, and the only other person to be there was Jensen's mom and the boys both started acting funny when she was brought up, all the clues were there, they just needed to be put together and Sherri knows her son, she figured it out. Yay.
Thank you. *hugs*

dreyth September 16 2009, 23:14:45 UTC

I knew it! Right when you said Kylie Rosenbaum! I KNEW IT!!!

Great chapter, but you need to update. Soon.

lycaness September 24 2009, 09:18:19 UTC

Hehe, yeah, that's when I gave it all away. :D
Thank you. *hugs*