harry/louis ficlets

[luxover]

turns out me being bored at work leads to me seeing if i can write harry/louis or not. all in a day's work, i'd say.

The Barter System
Girl!Louis and Harry, at home in the morning.
PG-13; 873 words.

Comments

[tamzinrose]

dude, i love wristcutters! this fandom continues to delight me.

[luxover]

oh my god, i know, right?! the end slays me EVERY. SINGLE. TIME. omg tho and the beach scene?

[cynicaliscious]

gah, all three were wonderful in their own way, but domestic fic is my favorite, and yours was just so alksjdalsjkdsaingly wonderful (or you "smashed it" hehe).

"No," he says, but it sounds a lot more like, "Nngghh." Louis figures she's very lucky that she happens to speak fluent Harry.

lovedlovedloved this line. and just how domestic and comfortable, yet at the same time kind of heartachey (although that might be because i'm listening to read all about it?), the first one was. the little inclusion of facts like rubber chicken on louis' messy floor, their cereal competitions, the x factor mansion were so lovely and perfect. everything was so natural and semisleepy and idek what i'm saying anymore but they were all fanastic and i hope you're bored at work more often if this is what comes from it! :D

[luxover]

haha domestic fic is a huuuuuge love of mine, too. it's especially great if there's good fluff, which, you know, i kind of missed out on here (oops) but just in general.

anyways. thanks for reading and commenting! :)

[likeredroses]

oh, wristcutters. I can never really decide how I feel about that movie. but the premise does create a quite different dynamic. it's interesting.

anyway, the second one is my favorite. handjob+feelings=basically an ideal fic premise negl.

and this: he wonders if Harry feels like that when he looks at Louis, and a part of him hopes not, because it's a horrible feeling, wanting something that much, even if he eventually gets it in the end. ahhhh. feelings.

also I loved your explanation of niall's antics :D

[luxover]

omg gurl dunneven, i am obsessed with that movie. like just thinking about the ending, i'm about to turn into a puddle of goo. so cute. so cute. i can't even right now. their stupid smiiiiiiiiiles!!!

handjob+feelings=basically an ideal fic premise negl. L M A O YES. we should go around and demand more of it from the fandom. haha

thanks for reading and commenting, lady :)

ALSO OMG NO YOUR ICON-- I WAS TWO SECONDS AWAY FROM WRITING AN ETERNAL SUNSHINE ONE, BUT THEN I WAS LIKE, THIS IS WAY TOO DEPRESSING, NO ONE WILL WANT TO READ IT BECAUSE THEY'LL HATE THEIR LIVES AFTERWARDS IF ONE OF THEM ERASES THE OTHER. do love that movie though.

[likeredroses]

maybe I'll have to give wristcutters a rewatch? I may have just not been in the right mood. it was a while ago; I don't really remember what it was that I didn't like.

ummm I would read an eternal sunshine au in an INSTANT. it is possibly actually my favorite movie ever. I definitely encourage this plot bunny.

[luxover]

oh man. then maybe i have no choice but to write it, when i find the time... ahhhh the more i think about it, the more i want itttt!

[unevenfootsteps]

god all of these were just flawless. i hope you never stop writing these boys, because i love the way you write them and in general. also, the wristcutters au was wonderful. great job!

[luxover]

;dkljfa;sdlkfj as;ldkfja;skldfj thank you!!! lol i will try my hardest to keep writing them, for sure! thanks for reading and commenting!!!!

[colazitron]

I love all of these and how they all carry an air of uncertainty. Makes for a very intriguing read.

I have no idea what wristcutters is but I'm guessing they're dead? In some sort of after life? Double suicide maybe? IDK IDK. It was lovely and achey anyway.

[luxover]

ahhhhh very glad you liked it!!!

and yeah, wristcutters is about a sort of limbo that people who kill themselves are sent to, and it's just complete shit, like the worst, most boring place you can imagine, and no one can smile there. and then the main character learns that his ex gf just ~arrived~ and so he grabs his crazy bff and they roadtrip to try to find her, picking up shannyn-sossamon-as-a-hitchhiker along the way, and then they run into tom waits being cray, and it's just amazing and i love it and highly recommend it if you want to watch a quirky, off the beaten path type of romantic semi-comedy. haha oh god, shut me up.

thank you for reading and commenting!!!