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The Permanence of Ink

Apr 03, 2011 17:08

Title: The Permanence of Ink
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Gen; Thiago Alcántara / Rafa Alcántara if you squint
Word Count: 920
Summary: They're watching a movie in their sweats, and Rafa isn't wearing a shirt; Rafa never wears a shirt, not if he doesn't have to, but Thiago's still never noticed the ink on his brother's skin before. He wonders how long it's ( Read more... )

fic, fandom: football, pairing: thiago/rafa

Comments 18

kitty69lover April 4 2011, 05:42:42 UTC

WOMAN! this was NOT PG!!! just saying lol.

they're perfect. but that tattoo, well, it's ridiculous.

this was pretty glorious.

luxover April 4 2011, 19:54:45 UTC

whatchu talkin bout, willis? according to mpaa, this is totally pg-- no cussing, nudity, sex, smoking, or drugs, and the most scandalous thing that happens is a kiss on the cheek! (but if you feel strongly about it, i can change it to pg13?)

the tattoo is sooooooo ridiculous. but like, just looking at it makes my heart want to burst from how adorable it all is, haha

ty for reading and commenting :))))

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luxover April 4 2011, 20:06:59 UTC

what what what what?!!? O M G HAPPY MOFUGGIN BIRTHDAY, LADY!! AHHHH!!!! WHOOOOO!!!! This makes my posting timing all that more amazing. go figure!

have a fantastic, wonderful, marvelous, brilliant day, and thank you for reading and commenting!! and prompting, duh!!!

soflawlessly April 7 2011, 00:36:58 UTC

Omg.
O.
m.
g.
PERFECTION.
It's so cute and sweet and asdfghjkl;.
Thanks for sharing!

luxover April 7 2011, 01:16:14 UTC

Ahhhhhhh thank you thank you for reading and commenting :)))

spdfg April 10 2011, 03:37:44 UTC

This story was adorable until I realised that the tattoo thing is actually real. Then I sort of wanted to die. Oh Rafinha. This is right up there with Messi's mum in terms of pure noooooooooowhyyyyywhatwereyouTHINKING. (Incidentally: this.)

Okay your fic was lovely though. I just wish it were more fictional. And I don't say that often, I can tell you that.

luxover April 10 2011, 12:37:03 UTC

Yeah, the tattoo is kinda horrific, I agree with you on that. But still kind of sweet at the same time? Idk, idk, like, I don't like the tattoo but I like that he got one of him and his brother? If that makes any sense?

Anyways. Thank you for reading and commenting.