*N Sync. Brown Muddy Waters

[luxshine]

Title: Brown Muddy Waters.
Fandom: Popslash.
Characters: Chris Kirkpatrick / Joey Fatone
Prompt: 017. Brown.
Word Count: 6,802
Summary: JC loses control.
Author's Notes: This one was a bit hard to write. You’ll know why. Dedicated to milosflaca for her unending support and her great suggestions, to joshysleo because she’s just that cool, to runzu in hopes that it will

Comments

[bellamyrose]

This is so awesome! I love it, but it was a tough read as well. Well done and I'm looking forward to the next part. :D

[luxshine]

Thank you. The hard part is almost done, so now we can go back to happiness :)

[ravenbat]

Oh JC, you caused the hiatus! eeek!

Love the story hon, love it. I can't wait for the next part. :)

[luxshine]

Thank you :)

And you see? this just proves that they should always listen to Chris.

[turlough]

at least it made him feel better. Safer, when he was surrounded by the sparks.

Oh no! Can't you see that this is a BAD sign, JC?!!

Chris was doing the equivalent of a cat puffing its fur when threatened

This made me giggle!

Seriously though, this quarrel and them using their powers is such a bad sign.

Joey heard quite clearly the click of a weapon being loaded. Many clicks, so it wasn’t only two henchmen. “You cut the lights, and we’ll do it as if it was a general robbery. No one will know what we’re really aiming for.”

Eeek!! This is scary! Why is Mr E so intent on killing Justin?!?

it seems that America doesn’t have two Super Protectors, but three

America, ha! They're only protecting Justin :-)

Not even knowing that Joey, JC and Lance had took up a new hobby that involved spandex tights and tying people to lamp posts.

*snerk* Hysterical!! :-)

“It’s your secret and I wasn’t going to go broadcasting it until I talked to you guys. Even if it is hard to explain why I watch a pigeon before the shows when you apparently

[luxshine]

What can I say? The more time they have powers, the more used they become to them, and the more 'instinctive' their use becomes, so yeah, not a good sign for some situations, is it?

Regarding Mr. E.... well, I'll just say he thinks he's got a good reason to kill Justin, and that reason is a big huge clue to his identity.

And hey, Joey and Lance have been doing things that have nothing to do with Justin ;) They're getting good at the Superhero thing.

I had to make up for killing Lonnie back in Amusement Park. Plus, every Batman needs an Alfred ;)

Hope you like the next installment as much :)

[turlough]

every Batman needs an Alfred

*snerk*

[turps33]

Oh my squee!

I love this series so very much!

This part was full of foreboding, and I can't see things going well at all.

Despite how bad the arguments were, I liked how you described them using their powers at the same time. That would have been scary to see.

[luxshine]

Things are going to get a bit darker before they get better, yes. But you know me. I <3 happy endings ;)

[musiclover03]

Aww my boys at odds with each other---*sniff* but theyre just trying to protect Justin.

Great chapter :) Nicely done.

[luxshine]

Thank you :) It's all JC's fault really, but I promise I'll make it better sooner or later.

[musiclover03]

I know :) You have to have conflict/angst in a story like that. It cant be happy all the way through otherwise it gets tiresome. People relate to chaos and pain, and life isnt always candy and flowers so why should stories be? Even in romance novels theres some sort of turmoil. :)