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Popslash. Space Cowboys I. Uneasy alliances

Oct 22, 2006 00:54

Title: Uneasy alliances.
Fandom: Popslash.
Characters: Chris Kirkpatrick / Kevin Richardson
Prompt: 022. Enemies
Word Count: 9,752
Rating: PG
Summary: Starship Captain Richardson finds himself and his crew in a dire predicament.
Author's Notes: I blame, equally, the Larger than Life video and Space Cowboy for this fic. You have been warned. Also, ( Read more... )

space cowboys, kevin/chris

Comments 33

duoshinigami October 23 2006, 21:19:47 UTC

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WTF!? That was amazzzzzzzzing! This is all so clever and well thought out! I love universes like this! Where everything is so new and you get to learn the intimacies of it as you go along. *happy sigh* It is all so very wonderful.

One of my favorite parts of this chapter was when the reason for AJ's nickname came up. Annoying Jerk. *snort* That is so absolutely delightful and so Kevin.

The part about S.W.E.E.T. has me so intrigued! I want to know every little thing about Howie!!..I mean, the Medical Unit. And N.I.C.L and B.R.O.C.K are so cute with each other. I love their scene together. Getting inside character's heads is my favorite part. I love hearing Brian's thoughts about how he isn't supposed to have real thoughts. It's absolutely fantastic ( ... )

luxshine October 24 2006, 04:11:14 UTC

Hey there, I'm glad you liked it.

Annoying Jerk was actually the first acronym I thought, because it is impossible to do a 'serious' software name with the letters A.J. I kinda managed later, but I just had to include it.

Also, I'm glad you like the Units. They're fun to write, especially B.R.O.C.K. which was a surprise since I don't like Brian a lot, go figure. I can't tell you anything about S.W.E.E.T., you know, spoilerwise, but I can tell you that probably next chapter you'll find out the story behind Spark's not-hair.

But man, talk about making me feel guilty! Don't fail college!

duoshinigami October 24 2006, 19:45:41 UTC

But failing out of college for Sparkly fiction is at least a good excuse right?

I mean, is Sparkly Space fiction!! How am I supposed to say no to that? Once I start I can't stop reading. *pouts*

luxshine October 26 2006, 02:00:09 UTC

Well, if you ask me the sparkly is a good excuse for everything ;)

But well, you have time while I finish part II to finish homework :D

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bellamyrose October 26 2006, 19:10:30 UTC

You already know I love this because I told you when I looked it over, but *squee*. I adore all of them so very much. Right now, A.J. and N.I.C.K. are my favorite crew members, but I adore Crazy, Crunk and Scoop so very much as well. I'm really looking forward to what happens next.

luxshine October 27 2006, 14:35:22 UTC

Thanks! I still dont' have a favorite, but AJ is fun to write :) Wait till you see next chapter, it's turning interesting ;)

bellamyrose October 27 2006, 15:17:50 UTC

*bounces*
*sits on hands*
*waits patiently*

dingbat66 October 27 2006, 10:02:31 UTC

Meeep! you can't stop now(bouncing in chair) more... please. I'm so hooked on this story.My mind is spinning in a million different ways
that this can go. Thanks

luxshine October 27 2006, 14:48:36 UTC

Not stoping, don't worry :) I don't know exactly when chapter two will be up, but I'm half way through it more or less.

chalcopyrite October 28 2006, 21:20:14 UTC

This is all interesting and nifty and stuff! I like the space cowboys (correction: I love the space cowboys -- just reading the name made me laugh and clap too hard to read for a good three minutes) -- they remind me a bit of one of the species in Tanya Huff's Valor books, who also had prehensile, emotive (and sometimes pink) hair. And who were also deeply entertaining.

I'm really intrigued by the hints you've given about what happened to Spark, and the spoooky subterfuge with Sweet. And I was so glad when Kevin asked what I'd been wondering -- what does S.W.E.E.T. stand for?!? I'm looking forward to finding out!

luxshine October 29 2006, 04:44:02 UTC

Thank you! The Space Cowboys are fun to write, I'll admit. I had never heard about Tanya Huff, but I'll be looking into them now. I was thinking a little about MEdusa from MArvel comics, to be truthfull.

Next chapter, I'll reveal what S.W.E.E.T. stands for, and a little more of what happened to Spark. Just a little, because there are two other mysteries to be introduced ;)

kittens_toy October 29 2006, 00:40:51 UTC

Oh Wow!! This is amazing. I can't wait to read more.

luxshine October 29 2006, 04:44:29 UTC

Working on that ;)