Title: Uneasy alliances.
Fandom: Popslash.
Characters: Chris Kirkpatrick / Kevin Richardson
Prompt: 022. Enemies
Word Count: 9,752
Rating: PG
Summary: Starship Captain Richardson finds himself and his crew in a dire predicament.
Author's Notes: I blame, equally, the Larger than Life video and Space Cowboy for this fic. You have been warned. Also,
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WTF!? That was amazzzzzzzzing! This is all so clever and well thought out! I love universes like this! Where everything is so new and you get to learn the intimacies of it as you go along. *happy sigh* It is all so very wonderful.
One of my favorite parts of this chapter was when the reason for AJ's nickname came up. Annoying Jerk. *snort* That is so absolutely delightful and so Kevin.
The part about S.W.E.E.T. has me so intrigued! I want to know every little thing about Howie!!..I mean, the Medical Unit. And N.I.C.L and B.R.O.C.K are so cute with each other. I love their scene together. Getting inside character's heads is my favorite part. I love hearing Brian's thoughts about how he isn't supposed to have real thoughts. It's absolutely fantastic ( ... )
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Annoying Jerk was actually the first acronym I thought, because it is impossible to do a 'serious' software name with the letters A.J. I kinda managed later, but I just had to include it.
Also, I'm glad you like the Units. They're fun to write, especially B.R.O.C.K. which was a surprise since I don't like Brian a lot, go figure. I can't tell you anything about S.W.E.E.T., you know, spoilerwise, but I can tell you that probably next chapter you'll find out the story behind Spark's not-hair.
But man, talk about making me feel guilty! Don't fail college!
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I mean, is Sparkly Space fiction!! How am I supposed to say no to that? Once I start I can't stop reading. *pouts*
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But well, you have time while I finish part II to finish homework :D
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*sits on hands*
*waits patiently*
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that this can go. Thanks
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I'm really intrigued by the hints you've given about what happened to Spark, and the spoooky subterfuge with Sweet. And I was so glad when Kevin asked what I'd been wondering -- what does S.W.E.E.T. stand for?!? I'm looking forward to finding out!
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Next chapter, I'll reveal what S.W.E.E.T. stands for, and a little more of what happened to Spark. Just a little, because there are two other mysteries to be introduced ;)
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