the world must end.

[lux__aeterna]

oh my god, i wrote a story. not just any story-- a lotrips story. stop the presses!

the dissolution of virtue
dom/billy
notes: i haven't written lotrips in an eon and a half. so forgive me if it's horrid. i also apologize for the title. i just like being pompous.

Comments

[andrealyn]

mmm, god yes.

I love that last paragraph, and how he relates smoking to Elijah, and my god have I missed your writing. It's just...so fresh and good and vivid. *loves*

[lux__aeterna]

*grins*

te amo!

[kiltsandlollies]

*exhales* yes.

More of your gorgeous use of words. You twist them in such a different way from anyone else.

Elijah smoked. He just did. And Billy, for the life of him, couldn’t separate subject and verb.

That alone was almost enough for me, you know? Because you have this way of nailing things to the wall just like that, that quickly and that well.

/world's most incoherent feedback.

So happy to see this, love.

[lux__aeterna]

not incoherent. i know what you mean. and it's a beautiful compliment, and thank you. a lot. so much.

see, there's incoherency for you.

[mark_947]

It's so pretty. I missed your lotr rps stories. I never thought of smoking being something intimate, but you're always making me think of things I never thought of. I hope this means you're back on a roll. I'm sleepy. lol
heart,
marly

[lux__aeterna]

sorry to make you stay up! and to disappear before you even went away-- the internet totally fucked off for the whole night, i don't know why.

anyway, for some reason i've sort of always thought of smoking as sort of an intimate thing. *shrugs*

*hugs* thank you for reading even when you were tired and needed to go to bed.

[lux__aeterna]

i think i might have missed them too.

*twirls you around*

[ella_minnow]

I absolutely love this. I love the quiet and restless sense anxiety of the whole story.

[lux__aeterna]

*smiles*

the quiet and restless sense anxiety

yes.