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Sentinel Fic: The Observer - Part Two

May 01, 2011 20:16

Title: The Observer
Author: luvspnl
Fandom: The Sentinel
Summary: AH. Cascade’s best detective, Jim Ellison, finds himself the target subject interest of a young college student, intent on observing the so-called closed society in the police.
Notes: And clearly by Saturday, I meant Sunday after I finish Script Frenzy April!

Happy May Everyone!

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the sentinel, au, fic

Comments 4

achilles_eel May 3 2011, 11:26:11 UTC

Oh man, I haven't read Sentinel fic in ages! And you're doing a great job so far for having not even finished the series! I think I finished the series at one point, but I don't remember much of it. That should make this fic that much more exciting! :D

Ah Blair, honesty is important! :D I DO wonder how Jim's going to react when he finds out.
I love that you had Blair playing both a Dr. McKay and a Dr. McCoy. :P Star Trek AND Stargate Atlantis in one chapter??? Was that intentional? LOL

Really, great job so far! My only complaint is that there isn't more! Hope to see an update soon!

luvspnl May 10 2011, 23:56:37 UTC

I'm so glad that you liked the fic so far! I hope one day to finish the series. Actually, I hope one day they stop being lazy and make the rest of the seasons available on DVD!

While I would just grin so wide to say that the it was intentional to reference ST and SGA, those names were actually used in the pilot, so I can't take credit for them. :( I do smile everytime I watch that part though, thinking about SGA!

I posted more now, and if my time doesn't keep getting stolen from me, I should update more regularly.

ficwriterjet May 4 2011, 02:13:54 UTC

Loving it so far. I can understand why Blair wouldn't have the guts to just come out and tell Ellison who he really was. And at that point, Blair probably thought telling him about being a Sentinel was more important. My guess is that Jim would think the news about having a son would be more important. Loved that Blair saved him from the truck during the zone out. :) I look forward to the next part. :)

luvspnl May 11 2011, 00:10:35 UTC

Yah! :) I wanted the story to be different in that he's not so drawn to Jim's lifestyle. He is young and likes that he gets to do his own things. We know Jim would have wanted to know that Blair was his son immediately, but Blair's thinking isn't always so logical. I posted the next part, and I hope that I'll be able to keep to a more regular updating too. *crossing fingers*