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Perfection Is A Lie - Chapter Nine

Nov 13, 2005 16:37

Title: Perfection Is A Lie
Author: Danielle aka luvnorliPairing: Orlijah, Some Monaboyd ( Read more... )

Comments 27

ph34rmoi November 14 2005, 01:56:15 UTC

Oh... wow. God, this was better than I ever could have anticipated.

So sad, but it's just so beautiful (heh, big fan of the angst).

This fic is awesome. Really.

*pets Elijah*

luvnorli November 16 2005, 04:21:37 UTC

*blushes* Thank you. I’m glad you like the angst. I try to give it a good shove in that direction in some parts but am not always sure if it’s working. I’m just too much of a softy at heart. I like everything to be happy, but that wouldn’t make much sense here, now would it?

*Elijah!muse snuggles closer and smirks at Orli!muse*

ph34rmoi November 16 2005, 05:41:52 UTC

=D Fluff is always good, too =P

Awwwwwwwww, how cute! See, fluff IS good! =)

Can I friend you?

luvnorli November 16 2005, 06:08:51 UTC

*nods head in agreement* Yes, fluff is definitely good. We loves it, precious.

Sure! I love new friends. *runs off to friend you*

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doodle_lover November 14 2005, 02:01:54 UTC

soooo pretty!! i love this story more and more with every chapter you post!

i don't blame dom...i can't wait for it either!

love you!

luvnorli November 16 2005, 04:24:17 UTC

Aw, thanks. *glomps*

I promise that it’s coming. We just have to work up to it. I wouldn’t tease you more than you could take.

love you back more than that!

doodle_lover November 16 2005, 18:06:06 UTC

lol...*hugs*

oooohhh....it's coming, now is it??
hmmmmmm....

nu-uh...love you back more than that!

loki_girl November 14 2005, 02:03:15 UTC

*Heart shatters* been waiting so long for this, I can't wait to see what happens next!

luvnorli November 16 2005, 04:26:59 UTC

*offers duct tape and a smile* Yeah, it’s been a looooooong time since I last posted. *sheepish expression* But one of the other good things about going home is that I’ll have a little more free time. No homework for me, just regular work. So I’ll hopefully be putting out the chapters a bit faster. *crosses fingers*

layne67 November 14 2005, 04:20:59 UTC

It's been a LONG wait but very much worth it. Thank you for updating. I love these series and am looking forward to finding out what will happen next :-)

luvnorli November 16 2005, 04:28:22 UTC

Long??? What do you mean by long? A month, long? *innocent expression* Okay, maybe just a lot little. And thank you for reading.

violettefemme November 14 2005, 05:12:50 UTC

I am so psyched to see this again! ( i think i just said psyched...lol) I just loved how sweet and undrestand Orlando is being with Elijah... and Dom's crush on him is just adorable. Poor Elijah needs to just take the opportunity his mother is giving him to talk to her and just fess up!

Though I will admit, I have this scene in my head of Orlando finding out and murdering Richard in cold blood with gleeful determination on his face to protect his beloved!

(note to self stop watching period romance movies)

luvnorli November 16 2005, 04:34:04 UTC

I’ll be sure not to tell anyone that you still use that word. And we’ll just ignore the fact that I have been known to do the same thing. I’m glad that you like my character’s interactions with each other. And I swear that Dom just wrote his crush on Orli into the story all by himself when I wasn’t looking.

I will freely admit to having a very similar scene in my head. My muse wants to go with it, but I keep insisting that it wouldn’t be very realistic. I’m no fun like that. I keep saying that Lij has to come to terms with it and fight back against it with a bit of help. But then my muse goes into a corner and sulks until I lure it back with promises of Orlijah pr0n.