Dan Post

[lureen_n_twist]

Title: Dan Post
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Canon one-shot, Jack and Lureen, and an old pair of boots.
AN: For wannabebrit, who gave me a hug in the form of Dan Post.

Comments

[9_blind_crows]

Oh, I love a viewpoint from Lureen...knowing as we do Jack's secret. I love Lureen. Love Jack. Love this. You are one hell of a writer.

[rhye]

Why the heck are you commenting here? I'm sitting here jabbing myself in the arm with a pen to stay awake and you're commenting!? Go away! :)

But thanks. I need to write more Lureen. I used to write a Lureen drabble pretty much daily.

[dclittledarlin]

[quote]But even though she fought it off, the memory of a Christmas Day came floating to her across the living room, and she understood why she'd put the boots on. If she couldn't get a hug from Jack, at least she could always get one from Dan Post.[quote]

Poor Lureen, to be in love with Jack (who wouldn't be) and never really have him, never get the love she so deeply craves. Great writing Jess!! Love your Lureen pov.

karla

[rhye]

Thank you! The writing on this is a little plainer than I'm used to doing, but I love my Lureen and I do so love hearing her voice :)

[wannabebrit]

Your Lureen is the gold standard, really. You handle her with such depth and emotion - giving her this richness that we didn't get to see in the movie itself. It's like you take her over and for that, I am grateful.

I can see Lureen finding satisfaction and comfort in a pair of worn boots, especially on days when Jack is far away from Texas, even when he is there. It's a connection to her past, to when Jack *did* pay attention her, and when he was trying.

Wonderfully done. *snuggles*

[lureen_n_twist]

ooc: Thankies!