... ... ... ... wow. Thats all I can think to say. this was absolutely phenomenal, shit. I dont know what was best about it, I cant say, but the raw emotion of it- I know the mun behind the mask so I know it is fiction but if I didnt know any better I'd say this is real, fresh pain.
ooc: Dude. I totally started crying while I was writing this. My blood pressure is through the roof, I have heartburn, and I just might take a swing at you if you were to walk into the room right now, so.... wow. I feel like shit. I guess I have a lot of angry in here somewhere.
It was really cool to read this take on how Jack died, what went on in Childress afterwards, and how angry Lureen may have been, before that call came from Ennis. Very well done.
I'm so very glad you weren't involved in the flashback scene they had in the movie, or the book for that matter. He had all his clothes on, right. You did warn me, but others have before and I never ran into anything like this. I am now backing away from Jack and Ennis fanfic. You are a good writer and your words are affective.
Jack left me without a husband, no one ta hold onto me when I wanted to pound the livin' daylights out of somethin', and no call ta mourn a man that didn't love me in the first place. I think I got a right ta be angry 'bout somethin'.
I read this a long time ago and didn't respond because I, as you would put it ;), didn't have anything brilliant to say. I still don't. This is a blow-me-out-of-the-water piece of writing--it's like you took a piece of Lureen's heart and slapped it down right in front of us, gore and all. Fucking fantastic.
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wow. Thats all I can think to say. this was absolutely phenomenal, shit. I dont know what was best about it, I cant say, but the raw emotion of it- I know the mun behind the mask so I know it is fiction but if I didnt know any better I'd say this is real, fresh pain.
Most phenomenal piece of writing yet.
wow
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It was really cool to read this take on how Jack died, what went on in Childress afterwards, and how angry Lureen may have been, before that call came from Ennis. Very well done.
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You are a good writer and your words are affective.
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You rock, so hard. This is awesome. Brilliant, brilliant response to the prompt.
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I read this a long time ago and didn't respond because I, as you would put it ;), didn't have anything brilliant to say. I still don't. This is a blow-me-out-of-the-water piece of writing--it's like you took a piece of Lureen's heart and slapped it down right in front of us, gore and all. Fucking fantastic.
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ooc: yay, that was my intention! Gore and all! Thanks :)
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