Chapter 15
A/N Hey! I’m back! Sorry this took so long to write. It was a mixture of pure laziness and being genuinely busy for once. I hope you like the chapter. It was tricky to write but I think it gets the message across. I’m not very good with emotional writing so feedback would be immensely appreciated!
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This was such a well written chapter with the heartbreaking conversation but it was it so painful to read. Welcome back and great chapter! :)
And Lily, what a bitch. And when I thought I couldnt hate her anymore I read this. I hope Luke finds out what his conniving bitch of a mom did.
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I'm still squicked about the age thing, especially since he's not 18 anymore. But you've written such an entertaining story, that I'm willing to put it aside.
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I felt the same when I started writing this but because I'm British and only 17 myself it doesn't feel so bad. I hope it's tasteful enough for you too overlook.
I hope you enjoy the rest of the story :)
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The breakup scene was wonderfully written. You've got the emotional stuff down.
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Thank you, that really means a lot :)
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i just got home from work xD and this is the first thing i see! OMG!
i literally squeed xD sooo excited.
-goes to read-
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this broke me.
oh goodness.
<3
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I hope it didn't make you too sad? <3
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