Higher Education - Chapter 15

[imnotatotalgeek]

Chapter 15

A/N Hey! I’m back! Sorry this took so long to write. It was a mixture of pure laziness and being genuinely busy for once. I hope you like the chapter. It was tricky to write but I think it gets the message across. I’m not very good with emotional writing so feedback would be immensely appreciated!

Comments

[shar_jere]

OOh god poor reid and luke. my poor babies great chapter.. :P

[imnotatotalgeek]

Thanks :)

[speechless16]

Ouch. The pain. Poor Reid. Poor Luke.
This was such a well written chapter with the heartbreaking conversation but it was it so painful to read. Welcome back and great chapter! :)

And Lily, what a bitch. And when I thought I couldnt hate her anymore I read this. I hope Luke finds out what his conniving bitch of a mom did.

[imnotatotalgeek]

Thanks :)

[tuckatangent]

This was great. So much tension! I'm impressed that Reid was able to resist comforting Luke, but then I guess Reid has decades of practice being a bastard. I wonder how you'll fix this. It would be really cool if Luke found out what Lily was doing.

I'm still squicked about the age thing, especially since he's not 18 anymore. But you've written such an entertaining story, that I'm willing to put it aside.

[imnotatotalgeek]

Thanks :)

I felt the same when I started writing this but because I'm British and only 17 myself it doesn't feel so bad. I hope it's tasteful enough for you too overlook.

I hope you enjoy the rest of the story :)

[tuckatangent]

Yes, it's been very tasteful. I like how you keeping bringing up the consequences for Reid if he's found out. Seems like he should really do the responsible thing, and move away until Luke's legal. I know Lily's supposed to be the villain, but she's also got a point.

The breakup scene was wonderfully written. You've got the emotional stuff down.

[imnotatotalgeek]

Lily has got a point but I think she should have spoken to Luke first to see who did the seducing etc. It's not fair to blame Reid completely because he's only human even if he is the responsible adult in the relationship. I've still got to work out how the ending will specifically work on a timeline but I hope you like it :)

Thank you, that really means a lot :)

[chip1701]

Where is the Enterprise when you need her? Who should be the first target - Lily or Damian?

[imnotatotalgeek]

Haha! I'm not sure. They're both pretty evil :P

[sripley]

haven't read yet, but.. AHHH!
i just got home from work xD and this is the first thing i see! OMG!
i literally squeed xD sooo excited.
-goes to read-

[sripley]

excitement gone =[
this broke me.
oh goodness.
<3

[imnotatotalgeek]

Sorry :(

I hope it didn't make you too sad? <3