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Fic: Time to Say Goodbye - Chapter 25

May 04, 2010 01:28

Title: Time to Say Goodbye
Author: ditzybea
Rating: R (to be safe)
Pairing: Luke/Noah; Luke/Reid
Word Count: 3237
Chapter Title: Broken Communcation

Summary: A/U Fic. Due to a request by Dr. Oliver, Noah has decided that he and Luke cannot be together anymore. How does Luke react? What will Noah do when Luke is really gone? And how does Reid fit into ( Read more... )

!author|artist: ditzybea, rating: r, fan fiction

Comments 2

amelialourdes May 4 2010, 06:59:44 UTC

I tried commenting over there but the AD froze the page! Anyway, since you're over here, I'm just gonna comment in the community. God, you made me miss Noah there for a minute! I can definitely see that you're an angst junkie and I convince myself that I'm not but I love that feeling of my heart jumping into my throat and staying there while I read the story. Really fantastic premise and a great chapter. Just one thing and I know that this is nitpicking but you do have a few typos throughout. I know you have a lot of reviews on the page and I tried to read through them but that AD popped up so I don't know if anyone else has mentioned it. Totally looking forward to your next chapter. :))

ditzybea May 5 2010, 04:45:18 UTC

I'm my own worst beta.
You can only re-read the story so many times. I try to catch all my errors.
What doesn't help is that I get so excited when I finish that I want to post it right away.

I'm glad you're liking it and I hope to have the next chapter up soon.