fan fic: it's that what if factor, part 14 (rated T/PG-13)

[sripley]

so i decided that since yesterday was so ... *cringes* not likable, that i would be nice and spoil you guys today. i wrote a LOT today for this [four or five more chapters at least], so i figured i could afford to do that. here's chapter 14 for everyone when they wake up, and i'll be posting 15 in the afternoon [so in about twelve hours]. enjoy <3

Comments

[shaffff]

just like the person (above) who commented, i too check for updates on ur fics daily :D . and after reading this latest chapter, I.AM.DYING.TO.READ.THE.NEXT!!! *thumbs up*

[casaluna85]

♥ ♥ ♥

That's all.

[thatsiturdead]

this was me, like 10 minutes ago... *loooooooooong day, walks around like a zombie, puts laptop on, see's you've put next chapter up and immediatly goes back to being ALIVE rather than the walking dead!*

LOL so, one = thankyou for making me energetic again! and two, thankyou for making them truly adorable yet again in this chapter! i needed that after yesterdays episode!

[csifan3]

Yay, I loved this chapter, like the others :) It's just so perfect!

[scoutdaniels]

"Well," Luke began nervously, clutching the phone tighter. He was actually glad he wasn't doing this in person. "I told him no," he started. Reid's heart clenched, though he wasn't completely sure why. "But I did tell him that I'd met someone, someone that I think I might want to move on with."

this line made me squee out loud; and the boys are so adorkable in this fic, dancing around each other like they do.

It doesn't sound like Luke made a clean break with Noah (or maybe I'm just projecting what happened on the show here) but I'm so happy to read that he was honest about his interest in dating other people.