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amyafa July 22 2013, 07:54:49 UTC
Hooray a new chapter.

Fortunatly they talked it out rather quickly. Luke could do with talking to someone about his selfdestructing lack of confidence.
I can not imagine him choosing a life with Noah out of guilt.

But damn another cliffhanger.

I will be keeping an eye open for the next chapter no matter how long the wait.
I would love to see how they proof that Noah is lying. What an ass.

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moonchilddj July 22 2013, 15:20:42 UTC
Thank you for reading! <3

I couldn't bear to drag it out with Reid being upset with Luke. My romantic sap just wouldn't let me. =p But yes, his lack of confidence needs to have an extra boost, so he would stop proverbially shooing himself in the foot with relationships! Sorry about the cliffhanger XD It seemed to be a good place to leave it while I straighten out my own personal life. Hopefully I can get things straightened out in a month or two...depending on the move...and not make you wait too long! I aim to make the cliffhanger, and Noah's accusations, worth it. X3

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gypsiesheart July 22 2013, 14:19:43 UTC
YOU!!!!!!! This is....wow! Glad they talked and worked things out, but damn The Whore of Oakdale and her big yap! She just HAS to cause trouble! And the douche is being is epic self, I see! He doesn't love Luke, he just doesn't want anyone else to have him! I hope Tom can see through Noah's douchery and I hope Luke come clean with the squinty bastard about him and Reid. Not that Noah deserves the truth, or has a right to it, but I want to see his reaction to a real man in Luke's life.

I think I've told you this, but good luck with the move, and I can't wait for a new chapter!

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moonchilddj July 22 2013, 15:26:36 UTC
*giggle* The Whore of Oakdale strikes! In my first draft, Allison wasn't in there, but upon thinking about it, who else is gonna go running to Noah with news that Luke is "cheating", and is the biggest Nuke cheerleader? Allison and her big yap seemed to fit the bill perfectly =p As for Noah's douchery, this is what I wanted to see when the show had the story of Luke being stuck between Reid and Noah...Noah only pretending to be blind after the operation so he can drive a wedge in between Luke and Reid. I wanted it to be a REAL triangle, but it didn't quite work out that way...yay for fanfic, right? Time will tell on who discovers Noah's fibbing. I've yet to work that part out yet...

Thank you, darlin', and I hope to not make you wait too long! <3

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fremi08 July 24 2013, 12:00:19 UTC
Oh, I'm so glad they talked things out! Very good!

Noah is just... ugh! I sure hope he's found out soon! Maybe in the courtroom, when all of Oakdale is watching?

Fantastic update! Thanks!

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zzzfreckles October 27 2013, 13:39:45 UTC
Just wanted to check in and see how the move went and when we can expect another great chapter. I am missing this story so much so please make it soon if you can and I can't wait for the DOUCHE to be gone.

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moonchilddj October 27 2013, 18:42:27 UTC
Aw, thank you for checking in! It's nice to know that someone is eagerly awaiting Chapter 10 XD

The move took a while, and we finally got everything settled in in September, after some personal health issues and all that...been busy getting things straightened, but now that we're (mostly) settled, I plan on looking over Chapter 9 and starting up with Chapter 10, hopefully this week! Keep your fingers crossed for me. =p The Douche will be gone ASAP! XD

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zzzfreckles November 15 2013, 03:40:35 UTC
Just checking in to see how Chapter 10 is coming along? I'm not trying to rush you but I can hardly wait to see how Reid and Luke take the Douche down.

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