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Always Home - Chapter 4/15

May 13, 2012 18:26

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rating: pg-13, !author|artist: hotlen, fan fiction

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slayerkitty May 13 2012, 23:15:13 UTC

Ahhh, still so good.

I suck, but I'm going to do my best to get you chapter five back tomorrow.

hotlen May 13 2012, 23:24:11 UTC

OK no rush. You know since I still have to finish chapter 6 and add in bits to chapter 5, but i wanted your input on a few places.

slayerkitty May 13 2012, 23:43:01 UTC

Oh, good, lol. :)

vision_m May 14 2012, 02:18:13 UTC

It has begun. For someone who has resigned himself to death Luke has a whole lot of strategy and knowledge about the games which very well could be the thing that saves his ass. I am looking forward to see how Reid and Luke meet up and work together in the games.

Great chapter

hotlen May 14 2012, 03:35:11 UTC

I have this feeling that even if we pretend we're OK about dying, we still want to fight. So even though Luke's all "yeah I'm going to die" he obviously doesn't want to just lay down and take it.

kccalgal May 14 2012, 03:13:14 UTC

It must be very hard for Luke and the other victims to be pulled from the only environment and social structure they have ever known and be dumped into a strange place with your only real knowledge being everyone is out to kill you. I would really like it if you have Noah die first, but I'm sure I'll enjoy whatever you have in store.

hotlen May 14 2012, 03:35:44 UTC

HA! best comment ever about Noah. He dies pretty quickly. Get rid of him, he's useless.

moerlin May 14 2012, 17:09:57 UTC

Well, good thing Luke has a strategy regardless. ;) I'm strangely excited to see what happens next, considering there's definitely bloodshed ahead and I'm usually not a fan of that.

(And how close to the books/movie is your story? Seeing THG tomorrow after all, just wondering how spoiled I'll be. ;))

hotlen May 14 2012, 17:28:08 UTC

You won't be spoiled. I had a different idea when I read the books of how it was going to end, and it didn't end that way so I wrote my own better ending, lol.

Watching the movie will help though, set scenery and get the gist of what happens and all that.

moerlin May 16 2012, 00:06:19 UTC

Aww, you definitely set up the scene(ry) very nicely here! The movie didn't even have a chance to surprise me. ;) (Though now I guess I gotta read the book, too. *sigh*)