Always Home Chapter 3

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Comments

[vision_m]

Okay the fact that I know some of these characters from the show is killing me the whole idea is saddening and much like Luke it definitely would be easier if we hated all the offerings but sadly its not the case.

Excellent chapter

[tldreamer]

I'm loving how you made all of Luke's opponents characters from the show that he interacted with (including Reg!). You friend did a nice job with the banner (I like the hill of flowers that was evocative of the scene in a previous chapter).

[hotlen]

REG! I will never forgive how they randomly offed him and then acted like whatevers even though Luke kept reminding us REG WAS OUR FRIEND! Ugh, why kill him of all people? And how was Reg throwing Casey a party when they never interacted besides once during the election? Anyway...

[kccalgal]

I applaud you for coming up with enough names in the general age group to be picked. I kept wondering who would be next.

My favorite part was Noah's description. LOL to the squints and the too tight shirts.

I saw the movie this weekend. I look forward to seeing how you parallel things.

[hotlen]

It was hard finding so many younger characters that Luke actually interacted with. At one point I was going to use that girl that was Kevin's girlfriend when he fell into the water during Luke's coming out, but I decided that was too much, lol!

[kccalgal]

The only name you might have added was that goofy Hunter character that vanished into thin air in January.

I know I'm horrible but he could have been vaporized to nothing when he was killed.

[hotlen]

Hunter? Oh him, he didn't have any scenes with Luke though did he? I was trying to get people who had story lines with Luke through out the years.

[petuniagirl]

I loved your use of all the characters from the show. I laughed at Chris's description as an ogre-looking monster. All your descriptions were fantastic.

Great chapter.