Rota Fortunae (15/?)

May 19, 2011 09:57

Wow, this took forever! Sorry if it seemed like I forgot about this one; actually, it was the agony of dialogue that JUST WOULDN'T COME TOGETHER. Just one darn scene, and I think I've finally wrestled it into submission. Hope this doesn't disappoint!

Title: Rota Fortunae (15/?)
Author: ladysalieri
Rating: Still plodding along at PG-13

O! I am Fortune's fool... )

rating: pg-13, !author|artist: ladysalieri, fan fiction

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1faghag May 19 2011, 16:26:24 UTC
OMG!!!!! I had been missing this!!! Poor Reid, he wants Luke so much that it hurts him. Brilliant chapter!!!!!!

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marsabi May 19 2011, 19:49:41 UTC
Great story. I love all the small, physical details that you add!

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ganeshalemming May 19 2011, 20:44:07 UTC

This is such an interesting and well-written story and I'm all tadpoles and dancing cows to see you post another chapter! I'm sorry it was so difficult to write, but I must say all your hard work paid off. Brilliant chapter! You're doing such a great job of realistically portraying the guys' emotional responses to a situation that is literally impossible, while keeping it grounded (!) in soap opera land too. And with both of them in character. Pretty amazing! :)

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tldreamer May 21 2011, 00:11:48 UTC
Hey, I just started reiding this entire story last night and ended up staying waaaaay too late because it was so good and I couldn't stop!! Can't wait to reid more!

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discordantcat May 25 2011, 08:00:06 UTC
I gotta say, I LOVE the parallel to the lawsuit: you know, Luke pretending then that it was all about Noah, and pretending now that it's all about the old Reid.

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