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You.

Mar 09, 2011 00:34

Title: You.
Author: sixtieshairdo
Rating: I'd say PG-13 but I think 12 year olds can read this without any rousing pleasures haunting them to bed.
Summary: Glimpses inside Luke's and Reid's heads.

( You. )

rating: pg-13, !author|artist: sixtieshairdo

Comments 20

rhiannonhero March 8 2011, 17:08:59 UTC

There were some really beautiful images and descriptions here. I thought it was lovely.

sixtieshairdo March 9 2011, 00:36:59 UTC

Thank you :)

sripley March 8 2011, 17:34:31 UTC

wow. this was fantastic. the descriptions are so beautiful, especially coming from their individual perspectives. wonderful job. thank you for sharing! <3

sixtieshairdo March 9 2011, 00:37:34 UTC

Oh the pleasure's all mine, bb :) I'm glad you liked this!

marsabi March 8 2011, 17:37:17 UTC

It's nice to see some poetry ! Lovely images here...

sixtieshairdo March 9 2011, 00:38:51 UTC

It's funny how I didn't even realize that I was writing poetry until your comment! And thank you :)

jem_018 March 8 2011, 18:19:56 UTC

this was lovely. ♥

sixtieshairdo March 9 2011, 00:39:13 UTC

Thank you, love ♥

g_and_honey March 8 2011, 19:16:19 UTC

Awesome!! I cannot write poetry for the life of me, so reading it from someone who has talent is such a nice treat. :-)

I especially liked the "You haunt my nights" passage. ♥!

sixtieshairdo March 9 2011, 00:40:34 UTC

I'm flattered by your kind words, bb. Thank you :)

And I liked that passage too! Tbh, I wanted it dirtier but I'm glad I went a 'cleaner' direction, hehe.