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Return 1/1

Feb 03, 2011 16:15

Title: Return
Author: Amber
Rating: NC-17
Note: Reid's alive after all. :) An expansion of my poem, You. Included at the top of the piece for continuity. I don't like the title, but it gets the job done. :)

( Now you're suddenly alive, and can't even walk fifty feet without being out of breath, and you want me to fuck you in the middle of this field against a tree? Are you out of your fucking mind? You're an asshole. )

!author|artist: tuckatangent, rating: nc-17, fan fiction

Comments 15

f3d0ragirl February 3 2011, 22:24:38 UTC

You got fucking hit by a train, and died in front of me. Now you're suddenly alive, and can't even walk fifty feet without being out of breath, and you want me to fuck you in the middle of this field against a tree? Are you out of your fucking mind? You're an asshole. You don't get to die, and then show up and expect everything to be the same."

me thinking: yes luke, he wants to fuck you, and dammit, you better fucking let him. it's reid, for fuck's sake!

:-P

tuckatangent February 3 2011, 22:27:10 UTC

Haha, you are so right. But I remembered the dream sequence, and decided to make Luke's response a little different. :) Might write a sexy part 2, but no words in my brain right now. Thanks for the comment!

f3d0ragirl February 3 2011, 22:34:20 UTC

the words will come to you when they're ready....and that won't be the only thing that will come. *is lame* LMAO

tuckatangent February 3 2011, 22:35:21 UTC

LOL!

joann414 February 4 2011, 00:58:25 UTC

OMG This was freakin fantastic. Your writing and descriptions in the dreams was perfect. Great read.

tuckatangent February 4 2011, 01:06:39 UTC

Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

bluemagicrose February 4 2011, 02:15:22 UTC

Oh Luke, don't be angry at Reid. Be angry at those shitty doctors at Memorial who didn't even TELL YOU THAT REID WAS ALIVE.

Lovely Amber. :)

thefigtree February 4 2011, 02:42:57 UTC

Reid's not dead, yay! Oh, poor Luke dreaming about him all broken and bloody. You write the emotions between them so well; when they come back together in this, it feels very true. I, too, would love to see a sequel - one in which they're inside where it's warm and they finally get to show each other their love.

marsabi February 4 2011, 04:02:56 UTC

Yay for Reid alive! Yes, give the man some sex now LOL- okay, when he's ready
I enjoyed all the churning emotions in this ! Nice job!