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Retrograde CHAPTER FIFTEEN

Feb 21, 2011 18:08

Title: Retrograde
Author Lure247 (AKA Laura)
Characters/Pairings: previous Noah/Luke, but there'll be none of that continuing in the story Luke / Reid
Summary: Luke ends up in Parkland hospital Dallas, severely injured, luckily one of the world's top neurosurgeons is on call that night. Unfortunately for Luke, he seems to have lost something......... ( Read more... )

retrograde, luke/reid, lure_atwt

Comments 9

biu07 February 21 2011, 19:21:26 UTC

OMG! I'm speechless. Usually I avoid watching violent films but reading this I couldn't even breathe. It is wonderfully written. Full of pain and sadness and ...everything.I can't find the words to explain what I felt while reading it. It's so sad to see Luke losing his trust in people while watching this. You are a fine psychologist and a talented writer. I love it. Please update soon! :)

shadownyc February 21 2011, 19:56:26 UTC

Very emotional chapter and that final line was quite a surprising twist!

I hope Reid can be supportive of Luke -- he'll really need him now.

joann414 February 21 2011, 20:48:21 UTC

Son of a bitch! Wish I could kick Noah in the head. Poor Luke. I love Reid for being so supportive, and I hope he does not back away. This was a perfectly written chapter. The emotion was so obvious.

shar_jere February 21 2011, 20:54:55 UTC

am really not shock at all am just glad luke has reid!!

mlmhm45 February 21 2011, 21:28:54 UTC

holy crap the tape scene just gave me chills