Part 6

[lurch1775]

It was a dark and stormy night in Greece. Thunder rumbled in the distance and the wind howled loud enough for them to hear from her room where they lay in the arms of one another. Lightning flashed frequently through the window, casting the shadow of their entwined bodies on the wall across the room. The storm could have been described as crazy,

Comments

[miley25]

Loved it! Update soon:)!x

[shericarmichael]

nice story! Update soon

[cactusgirl1968]

I have just found this and I'm so excited!! I will read it all and then pop back to post a decent comment :0)

[cactusgirl1968]

As promised, more comments. I love this! The way you write their relationship is perfect - they know it is wrong but their strength of feelings for each other is too powerful to fight. The descriptive writing shows great detail and make the story very realistic. Loved their hot love-making at the end and especially their moments of self-doubt. I wonder if this is the start or end of somethiong for them though? looking forward to the next part.

[ext_1156549]

Amazing
Please update soon
:D