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Paka Ahali, Chapter Three

Feb 01, 2006 23:42

Title: Paka Ahali, Chapter Three
Author: frk_werewolfFandom: Angelverse ( Read more... )

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frk_werewolf February 2 2006, 21:38:48 UTC

lol, isn't it sweet? Of course, as with most fic in this 'verse, it won't stay that way for long. *innocent look* But for a while, it will. :D

amyleerules February 2 2006, 13:57:53 UTC

That was intersting, it was kinda sad, and at the same time cute. I sadly have never seen Angel with Gunn in it but, you seem to have his character and all the characters down with your own little twist on them. Great job

frk_werewolf February 2 2006, 21:40:58 UTC

Thank you very much. I hope to keep Gunn in character. He's one of my favs on Angel, after Wes and Doyle, but it's hard to get his inner-city vocabulary down (what can I say? I'm an Okie! ^_^) So I tend to totally bypass his typical use of slang, just to keep that part of him from becomming horribly represented.

ebonypsyche February 3 2006, 03:01:22 UTC

*bounces* such a good chapter. I love Wes in thought..even primal thought. It's sexiness :)

frk_werewolf February 3 2006, 03:40:23 UTC

Isn't he great? Even when he's all primal, he's still analytical. Of course, I would't write him any other way. hee!

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frk_werewolf February 5 2006, 23:50:08 UTC

Hee! Thank you very much. I'm glad you're enjoying it.

neuroticsquirrl February 4 2006, 07:44:13 UTC

So sweet! I love cute little kind of crazy demon Wesley! EEEEEEEEEE!!! Your writing is so pretty!
Minor typo alert: "You're eyes" should be "Your eyes."

frk_werewolf February 5 2006, 23:51:12 UTC

Thanks for the typo. THere always seems to be one that sneaks it's way in there, eh?

Your writing is so pretty!
Awww. thanks. *blush*