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SDF #104: Oz and William's Date

Apr 05, 2007 14:35

Segment: Oz and William's Date

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( Oz stared at William's mother, a strange sense of fear building within his stomach as she narrowed her eyes at him thoughtfully. )

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werewindle April 5 2007, 21:03:33 UTC

*squee!* That rocked. Oz's last line was just sweetness. ^__^

frk_werewolf April 5 2007, 21:06:55 UTC

Wasn't it? Hee!

vinniebatman April 5 2007, 21:18:26 UTC

Aw, so cute.
More please!

frk_werewolf April 5 2007, 21:28:26 UTC

Isn't it adorable? These too are far too sweet.

woman_of_ April 5 2007, 21:20:40 UTC

Oh Oz and William love, adoreable. They are so cute together!

frk_werewolf April 5 2007, 21:30:14 UTC

Hee! I know. :P

authoressnebula April 5 2007, 21:51:23 UTC

Too sweetie. I loved this little bit! Especially Oz!babble. 0_0 I never would've expected Oz to be nervous, but you did it very well.

Quick thing you might wanna catch:

He was dressed almost the way he normally was, in pressed slacks and a button up shirt. But they were nicer, giving Wesley an almost model-esc air.

I think it's William you mean. (And don't feel bad; I try to write spite or spiffy or anything similar and they come out Spike and Spuffy. *headdesk*)

~Nebula

frk_werewolf April 5 2007, 21:56:36 UTC

Thank you so much for catching the name. I was bouncing between writing this and reading a kid!Wesley fic last night, so... :P

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frk_werewolf April 5 2007, 23:21:35 UTC

Hee! They so are.