Comments | lunchbox_queen: Read It And Weep

lunchbox_queen

Read It And Weep

Oct 15, 2006 14:20

(Okay I am not that bad.)

I have created a blog to showcase my okay-est works of fiction. Currently the majority is HP Fanfic, but soon I'll be posting a new original story inspired by Eris' series of interlocked vignettes.
You can find it here.
(I like reviews.)

Comments 2

nlxth October 15 2006, 17:52:58 UTC

I'm working on a paper, so I only had time to read the first chapter of Solemnly Swear.

I'd call it very staccato; it jumps between scenes and viewpoints very quickly without any transition, which makes it a bit difficult to follow. A more even flow between ideas would be nice. I love the characterization, though! The brussel-sprout contest is great, and you've done an excellent job of making them just the right amount of mischievious. Good work!

I'll look forward to reading more when (if ever) I have time.

lunchbox_queen October 15 2006, 23:23:41 UTC

Thanks, Jesse. Solemnly Swear is the oldest work posted, from I think 2003 - I think when I do get around to a rewrite, it'll have to be from barest bones. My style's developed a whole bunch since then.
Try Magus Meridian, it's the one I'm battling writer's block for, but I'm really excited about it and I hope to get the damned thing finished... one day.