dandelion

Feb 06, 2010 16:03

title: dandelion
type: oneshot (1139 words)
fandom: shinee
pairing: none, really
rating/warnings: g
author's notes: pretty much wrote this in one sleep-deprived sitting. i really wanted to write out one particular scene, and i guess this is what came of it. beta'd by austere_flare

scattered by a gentle breeze, we fly with our own wings now )

pairing: ot5, fandom: shinee

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lunayeppeo February 6 2010, 08:41:02 UTC
I'm sorry. ;_____; Thank you for reading~!

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aescapes February 6 2010, 08:52:06 UTC
sobbing

YOU BROKE MY HEART SO GENTLY AND PERFECTLY. D: i think i need a hug.

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lunayeppeo February 6 2010, 09:03:08 UTC
I'm sorryyyyy! ;A; *hugs tightly*

Thank you so much!

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aescapes February 6 2010, 09:06:17 UTC
/hugsss

i don't mind the broken heart b/c secretly i have been creeping on this journal and waiting and hoping for a new update~ :3 this was so precious. ♥

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lunayeppeo February 6 2010, 09:08:55 UTC
Uwaaaa I hope I lived up to your expectations, even with this rushed piece! *A* Thank you so much, you're always so sweet~ ♥

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sitiisinsane February 6 2010, 09:10:43 UTC
this is beautiful♥

it was like i could feel every emotion.i think my heart cracked somewhere along the lines of Their final goodbye stage was filled with as much emotion as their very first performance. Suddenly, it was debut all over again; they were older and wiser this time, but nothing could ever take away the nervousness and excitement that wracked their bodies, even with the impending sense of conclusion that lay ahead.

ok.should stop here b4 I quote the whole thing.thank you for sharing this!

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lunayeppeo February 6 2010, 09:12:45 UTC
I'm so glad you found it so! I tried to focus on description rather than dialogue as I often end up doing, so I'm really happy that I was able to convey those emotions well. Thank you very much!

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mayzeeacala February 6 2010, 09:18:56 UTC
I was so broken :( this broke m. Heart into millions of pieces :( eternal umma key is and eternal maknae taemin is I don't want this to happend even in 100000 years :( shinee will perform until the end of time ajah~!

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lunayeppeo February 6 2010, 09:21:41 UTC
I'm so sorry! ;____; It'd be great if they could last together as a group for a very long time. Thank you for reading!

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mayzeeacala February 6 2010, 10:10:59 UTC
haha I hope they could last for a really long time. like until the end of time haha >:D

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lunayeppeo February 6 2010, 09:57:59 UTC
I'm very sorry for the tears. :( Thank you for reading this!

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