Comments | lunatic_cupid: Fic: Smooth Criminal (14/?, Multi Pairing, PG-13)

sweetrapture82 in lunatic_cupid

Fic: Smooth Criminal (14/?, Multi Pairing, PG-13)

Aug 07, 2011 22:15

Title: Smooth Criminal
Author: Kori
Disclaimer: Not mine
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Nope, 'tis A/U
Characters/Pairing: Numerous, check tags
Summary: If they wanted to maintain their friendships, they had to maintain the charade
Prompt: #45 - Tongue ;; Table
Warnings: Language, possible adult situations, illegal activities
Notes: Check the story guide ( Read more... )

pairing: velvet sky/chris sabin, a/u, smooth criminal, comm: litafics, type: fics500, series: moments in time, character: alex shelley, character: lita, character: trish stratus, comm: divafanfics

Comments 6

sparkly_shiny August 8 2011, 03:15:56 UTC

Ohhh, there's going to be some trouble ahead. The chemistry between A&A is just explosive, like I said. I love how you write them. I very much enjoyed the interaction between all of them in this part. Great work <33333333

sweetrapture82 August 8 2011, 03:19:10 UTC

Yup, yup. Heh, just how I would picture them, given their personalities. And thank you, so much. That means a lot to me.

<33333333

sparkly_shiny August 8 2011, 03:29:41 UTC

I thought it was really believable.

Alex is going to be thanking the body shots later. LOL.

sweetrapture82 August 8 2011, 03:31:03 UTC

:) well I am glad to hear that.

And yes, lol. major assistance to those

cherrycokerocks August 8 2011, 05:46:49 UTC

Wow, I don't think I've ever seen Alex move so fast not even when he was running from the authorities, lol.

I could totally picture the look on Josh's face when he said "Each other?". Haha.

Great interaction in this part, babes. Can't wait for more :)

sweetrapture82 August 8 2011, 11:22:11 UTC

Just need the motivation, lol.

haha, well that's good.

thank you so much sweets & hopefully soon :)