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Fic: Smooth Criminal (3/?, Multi Pairing, PG to R)

Jul 19, 2011 15:33

Title: Smooth Criminal
Author: Kori
Disclaimer: Not mine
Rating: PG to start, will go up
Spoilers: Nope, 'tis A/U
Characters/Pairing: Lita, Velvet, Chris & Alex in this part
Summary: If they wanted to maintain their friendships, they had to maintain the charade
Prompt: #52 - Shower ;; Table
Warnings: Language, possible adult situations, illegal ( Read more... )

character: chris sabin, character: velvet sky, a/u, smooth criminal, comm: litafics, type: fics500, series: moments in time, character: alex shelley, character: lita, comm: divafanfics

Comments 4

cherrycokerocks July 19 2011, 19:57:09 UTC

I love the way that you are using both Chris and Josh, haha.

The boys have some nerve and the visual of Jamie going to Church with all her illegal activities made me smile.

More soon, when you can :D

sweetrapture82 July 19 2011, 20:00:48 UTC

that'll be explained soon-ish I think, lol.

and don't they just? lol.

♥ hopefully soon

sparkly_shiny July 19 2011, 20:43:04 UTC

Sheesh, they're just a couple of delinquents, aren't they? *shakes head* I absolutely love the way you write them, it's so realistic. LOL, Alex trying to use blackmail on Amy. That just cracked me up, he's a total smartass with an answer for everything.

I love Jamie in this. "You really need to do something about that growth on your face." She and Amy will keep them in line, for sure.

Great work, can't wait for more, when you can <3

sweetrapture82 July 19 2011, 20:45:50 UTC

One more so than the other, ;) but yes, lol. And yup, naturally, lol.

:) and yes they definitely will.

♥ hopefully soon