wow! This is so good! I love how you show emotions and you can hear the thoughts! This is amazing <3 I'm so glad you wrote this. It's so sad yet so beautiful. Thank you
Oh wow. This is perfect. In an angsty, heart-breaking way. Poor twins. *huggles*
I love that he only started crying once he knew Fred was alive (and, btw, you had me seriously scared he wouldn't be for a while) - like it was only then that he could feel the pain on a level that wasn't beyond tears.
Yeah, I wanted to... kind of postpone his emotions until he knew Fred was alive. Hmm... I couldn't do it to George in this fic, I couldn't kill Fred. Poor Georgie <3
And thanks for that... the last two sentences kind of broke me when writing it... I didn't plan it, it just came flowing out of my mind, so to speak, and I was just like "what HAVE I written?!" and then I had to read it again for stylechanges... gah... I cry so easily
I'm just very happy you enjoyed it (well... liked the angsty darkness and stuff) and left me a review <3 *hugs you to and hands you a twin*
Wow, Lotte, this was really well written! A real stream-of-consciousness quality to it (which I'm a fan of, when it's done right). Poor twins, all alone with only each other *cries*
Anyway, thanks a lot =) I really appreciate your comment, your choice of words gives me the feeling that I'm intelligent ;D Anyhow, still thanks for liking it ^^ (oh, and I noooeees, I'm a horrible writerperson, I like to make my characters suffer)
Oh, Lotte, this is just...I cried. And my younger brother stared at me like I was insane. But that doesn't matter, because this is just wonderful. *glomps*
I'm so grateful for all the great feedback I've gotten ;_; Thanks for liking! (and I knoooow about the family... I have that too. I just shoo my brother away ^^)
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I was afraid that it would be a little... 'too much', all the dramaticness =D
Mooouuu your comment really makes me giddy ^^
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Poor twins. *huggles*
I love that he only started crying once he knew Fred was alive (and, btw, you had me seriously scared he wouldn't be for a while) - like it was only then that he could feel the pain on a level that wasn't beyond tears.
The pain would remain.
Gah. This line killed me.
I totally loved this, thank you!
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*gives twins a hug too*
Yeah, I wanted to... kind of postpone his emotions until he knew Fred was alive.
Hmm... I couldn't do it to George in this fic, I couldn't kill Fred. Poor Georgie <3
And thanks for that... the last two sentences kind of broke me when writing it... I didn't plan it, it just came flowing out of my mind, so to speak, and I was just like "what HAVE I written?!" and then I had to read it again for stylechanges... gah... I cry so easily
I'm just very happy you enjoyed it (well... liked the angsty darkness and stuff) and left me a review <3
*hugs you to and hands you a twin*
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...wait, isn't it a little cruel to separate them? I'll just have to have them both. Such a shame...
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Anyway, thanks a lot =) I really appreciate your comment, your choice of words gives me the feeling that I'm intelligent ;D
Anyhow, still thanks for liking it ^^ (oh, and I noooeees, I'm a horrible writerperson, I like to make my characters suffer)
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~~Ashley/La Vie Bohème
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I'm so grateful for all the great feedback I've gotten ;_; Thanks for liking!
(and I knoooow about the family... I have that too. I just shoo my brother away ^^)
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