Dark Surrounds Me Part 1

Nov 03, 2008 08:36

  Dark Surrounding Me

Three fifty-six a.m. The glaring red numbers on the clock glowed.

Sitting on the edge of the bed, with a huge black T-shirt and a pair of loose boxers on, I slumped and wondered, for what seemed like the hundredth time that night, 'Where is Yunho?'

On one hand, I'm glad he's not home, on the other, well, there is no other. I'm ( Read more... )

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irerd_taga November 3 2008, 16:13:15 UTC
Poor Jae! To be caught in the act of being raped by Yunho's brother and then Yunho abusing him! *Did his brother convince Yunho that Jae seduced him or something, to make Yunho change so drastically towards Jae?* And now Jae's pregnant, with Yunho's child!
Hope that the truth comes out and Yunho will change back to his loving self towards Jae!

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lunarrays November 3 2008, 20:45:17 UTC
All will be expained, so don't worry.
we'll have to see about Yunho changing.

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ltbngoc November 3 2008, 16:23:07 UTC
Jae!!!!!
Hope Yunho soon figure out the truth :(

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lunarrays November 3 2008, 20:45:57 UTC
maybe Yunho will soon get the truth soon

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kpopangel November 3 2008, 16:44:31 UTC
oh poor jae T.T i hate to see broken!yunjae but still i continue to read it.. OMG i can't believe how ignorant yunho is to not know that he was raped by his own brother.. that bastard of a brother... and if that brother really have a thing for jae why didn't he try to explain things and save jae from all these... unbelievable....

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lunarrays November 3 2008, 20:48:31 UTC
all will be explained soon. and yeah I don't like a broken YunJae either, but, maybe it won't last long.

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kpopangel November 4 2008, 09:24:23 UTC
*wipes sweat* phew.. thank God :)

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lunarrays November 4 2008, 13:21:29 UTC
the next chapter will be the hardest for everyone to get through, even though I didn't make it as bad as I wanted to. I really couldn't put Jae through what I had origanlly planned, it's bad enough as is. good stuff(?) after the next chapter, maybe...

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ookazumioo November 3 2008, 17:43:00 UTC
Yunho is so violent ,, how come he is abusing Jae T_T

but i pity Yunho more .. i am sure that his heart is broken and it hurts him each time he abuses Jae coz he still love him T_T

This fic seems very interesting i want to know how the YunJae love will overcome all this misunderstanding..

I believe YunJae love is strong enough to have a happy ending ^^

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lunarrays November 3 2008, 20:51:56 UTC
Yunho is abusive for now, but, I think it will get better, maybe. I will do a chapter from only YTunho's pov soon, so alot will be explained.

YunJae love will ALWAYS overcome, well, in my fics anyways.

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crazzyme8 November 3 2008, 17:47:46 UTC
hopefully the abuse will be less and yunho will see the light as the story progresses that jae really did not cheat on him. btw, i added you as a friend because i couldn't open beast of the matter and my slave. i hope you add me back. tnx.

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lunarrays November 3 2008, 20:53:36 UTC
it will be worse then it will get better, and yes, it wilol get better, maybe.
i added you as friend.

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