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lunardreamed

Five Times Dean Was Flabbergasted

Oct 15, 2006 19:32

Title: Five Times Dean Winchester Was Flabbergasted

Author: Lunardreamed

Rating: Teen - nothing you wouldn’t see on an episode

Category: Gen

Characters and Pairings: Dean

Spoilers: not really

Series: N/A

Length: 1,167 words

Archive: Please tell me where.

Note: rinkle requested this and I adore her, so she gets what she wants ( Read more... )

fanfic, supernatural fic, five things

Comments 26

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lunardreamed October 16 2006, 02:09:22 UTC

Wheee! I am such a feedback whore.

Thank you so much.

1. :D Poor Dean. So confused.
2. Oh yeah. I have yet to see a fic where Dean is first introduced to guns and I don't think they would have been big on them in the pre-demon household.
3. Yes. I really don't like stories where he is and always was the confident ladies man. Sorry, no way.
4. *grin* Not even dead ladies can resist him.
5. Maybe Dean can kiss it better.

Glad you liked it. I was worried there was too much angst for something with a word like "flabbergasted" in the title.

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lunardreamed October 16 2006, 02:22:53 UTC

That's my opinion.

Probably. Suggestions, preferences, glaring errors?

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je_suis October 16 2006, 02:30:04 UTC

Oh, Dean.

I love these, but especially that last one. Ouch. :(

lunardreamed October 16 2006, 02:36:44 UTC

He just hurts so good. *cuddles*

dotfic October 16 2006, 03:08:06 UTC

The man who puts him to bed that night smells wrong. Dean doesn’t like seeing those hands that held a gun touching Sammy. He doesn’t like the look in Dad’s eyes. Dad doesn’t feel safe anymore.

The Dean POV in this is amazing. This is interesting, the way his father changes for him. You did angst with moments of humor, which I love.

I like how you used the "5 times" format, how the Dean-voice changes with each age. The first paragraph worked very well, setting things up--it hooked me in. Nice work. :)

lunardreamed October 16 2006, 04:42:11 UTC

Thank you very much. I'm glad that you appreciated the changes in his perception of his father.

I'm glad you enjoyed the combination of humor and angst.

It's nice that the beginning hooked you in and I'm glad you enjoyed the changes in his voice.

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lunardreamed October 16 2006, 05:10:00 UTC

Thank you. :)

ewanspotter October 16 2006, 06:27:38 UTC

Wow, this is amazing. Funny one second, tragic the next. Lovely job.

lunardreamed October 17 2006, 00:34:19 UTC

Thank you. Glad you liked the combination.