Comments | lunadeath02: [Fic] M.E.R.L.I.N. 1/4 (+epilogue), (NC-17, Arthur/Merlin, AU)

lunadeath02

[Fic] M.E.R.L.I.N. 1/4 (+epilogue), (NC-17, Arthur/Merlin, AU)

Mar 29, 2012 13:09

So, I have decided to post the first chapter to my fic today, even though the epilogue isn't completely done yet. Still, I have a good feeling that I will get it done this weekend. So here's the first part. Hope you all enjoy ( Read more... )

fanfiction, my fics, arthur/merlin, slash, merlin

Comments 27

archaeologist_d March 29 2012, 18:41:48 UTC

I loved it. Loved that Merlin was a prototype. I do wonder where Arthur's semen is going. I also loved that Arthur was falling for him.

lunadeath02 March 29 2012, 18:54:23 UTC

Thanks! :) Yes, that is a bit of a mystery. I'm sure that Arthur will have it figured out soon, since he's a so-called robotics expert. XD
Arthur was doomed the moment Merlin set foot outside his shipping crate. ;) Thanks for replying! I should have the next part posted next week. <3

arthurmerlinfan March 29 2012, 21:56:04 UTC

lunadeath02 March 30 2012, 16:07:42 UTC

Thank you. :) I'm very pleased that you enjoyed it. I hope you enjoy the next part.. even if it gets a bit angsty. XD

geekslave March 29 2012, 22:26:49 UTC

Very cool and interesting concept. The last sex scene was very hot. The first was hot but also funny, with Merlin and his rambling technical explanations. I definitely love that Arthur is already developing feelings for Merlin. Loved that little bit where Arthur noted that merlin is starting to use contractions like a human. Like how Merlin is slowly changing. It was so adorable how excited he got when Arthur allowed him to keep the plant. It would be very interesting to know if Merlin actually feels anything when they're having sex or he's just doing what he's programmed to do. I'm sure Arthur must be wondering that.

Stacey

lunadeath02 March 30 2012, 16:15:54 UTC

Thanks for the kind reply! :) Yup, Merlin is quite the different robot... but that is explained later on. :) Merlin's differences will show even more in the next chapter.
I'm sure that Merlin can feel something when having sex. When writing this I think I was merely thinking that it is pain he doesn't feel (very much), so of course he doesn't feel the cold or any kind of discomforts that humans do. :)
Thanks for replying! I'll be posting the next part, hopefully, on Tuesday.

dolce_piccante March 30 2012, 06:24:20 UTC

ooh this was very intriguing! i can't wait for more :)

lunadeath02 March 30 2012, 16:18:51 UTC

Thanks muchly! More should be posted on Tuesday, if all goes well.

meltedbones March 30 2012, 09:31:09 UTC

AHHH I love this. I can't wait for more, robot!Merlin is so adorable. I hope we see him interact with Gwaine!

lunadeath02 March 30 2012, 16:24:18 UTC

Thanks! And yes, you'll see Gwaine later on. :)

badjujuboo March 31 2012, 01:51:17 UTC

I'VE BEEN DYING FOR A SPACE!FIC FOR SOOOO LONG NOW AND THIS IS EVERYTHING!!!

We could just rub our sexual appendages together or I could take your erect penis into my mouth. I have a suction that rivals any Hoover or vacuum cleaner ever invented…"

laughed out loud SO hard! Can't wait to see what's next!

lunadeath02 April 2 2012, 14:57:33 UTC

You're very welcome! :)

I will most definitely be posting part two tomorrow; today I don't have much time.. :( But at least I finished writing the epilogue! :D