[Fic] Heaven on Wheels 3/?

[lunadeath02]

Some days I really wish I could just rip my womb out. XD (I have cramps again, argh

Comments

[kanis13]

I really like your story! It makes me happy.

I have one question though: Didn't Arthur meet Morgana already (albeit shortly) in part 1?

("All right, Romeo, that's enough. I don't wish to see you kissing my brother anymore."

"Morgana," Merlin sighed, cheeks ablaze.

Merlin's big sister, Morgana, was pale just like Merlin and had long, dark hair and blue-green eyes. She was wearing a simple, yet elegant ensemble with high heels to match and ruby red lips.

"I'd give him a thousand more if I could," Arthur declared, trying his best to be un-intimidated.)

[lunadeath02]

You're right. *facepalm* I was going to edit that bit in this chapter, but I must have forgotten completely as I was typing it up. I will edit some of this later, but let's just say that this was their second meeting. *face/keyboard*

Anyway, glad you're still liking it, even if I made a slight boo-boo. XD

[kanis13]

No worries! It only shows how closely I follow your lovely story. :)

[archaeologist_d]

Ah, so sweet. I love that Uther isn't making it hard for Arthur to see Merlin. Loved Morgana's protective nature. Well done.

[lunadeath02]

Thank you! Glad you liked it. I just couldn't make Uther into a real arse in this one. I have a couple others that will be taking that role. XD

[emz567]

Another great chapter. Loved the bonding of Uther and Merlin at the end with uther's awkwardness of how to deal with the situation. Also love the continuous images of Arthur carrying Merlin around. Can't wait for the next part now :)

[lunadeath02]

Uther is a bit of an English gentleman. :) He tried to do what was right for his son's sake. :)
It's a good thing that Arthur's so strong. ;) He enjoys carrying Merlin, so it's lucky for Merlin.
Thanks for reading and for the nice review!

[sunny_rainfall]

Hooray for Uther not being a dick for once

[yenny2206]

A good and caring Uther, Nice!!