C. Watching...

Jul 12, 2009 22:09

I've been watching you closely...
every move that you make
All the things that you show to me, are getting harder to take...- Jack Savoretti

I watch you.
Silently marvelling in my ability to only see you, only hear you, only think you.
You're features become heightened, somehow brighter, more enticing, like special effects in a movie.
I can almost ( Read more... )

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purple_6490 July 13 2009, 02:45:33 UTC
Holy Fuck! ( pardon my language) but this is really good! *happy dance in my living room* this really makes me smile like an idiot, LOVE the ending. That last sentece is mindblowing :)

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anabella23 July 13 2009, 03:12:04 UTC
Mimor! I'm glad that you waited to write, because THIS is FTW!
And I'm so happy that my messed up situations inspire you, I'll continue being my crazy self to make you smile!!!
Do you really need my fav lines?
"You're features become heightened, somehow brighter, more enticing..." (rlly enticing, btw)
"I watch you and I wonder what you're thinking" (because this happens ALL the fucking time with him)
"I want to know what will make you break. What does it take?More skin? Less attention?" (because I DO want to know, lol)
"...my lips turn into a smile when I hear your voice and my mind screams when someone gets too close" (because this really happens. My mind doesn't scream, but I do want to rip some heads off...)
And I agree, HOLY FUCK! indeed, because the ending was so awesome...
So, I don't thank you for writing about certain someones, I thank you for delighting me (and everyone who has the pleasure to read your stuff) with your writing...
xoxo
B*

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bella_violet20 July 13 2009, 03:38:24 UTC
I can definitely relate to this. My fave line: "I hate you for a while, but then, a word, a gesture or the smallest touch turns me into fire again." Nice.

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