HOUSE OF SIN - The Diary of Uke Yutaka : CHAPTER 7 PART 3

Aug 29, 2009 03:35


Title: HOUSE OF SIN - The Diary of Uke Yutaka
Chapters: 7.3/??
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luna_no_koibito September 3 2009, 15:28:00 UTC
I AM AN IDIOT! I APOLOGIZE m(_ _)m!!!
I didn't notice the comment, becasue of lack of userpic IT MISSED MY EYE!

I am very glad that you loved the chapter, and so very honored that I was able to make your day, and now I feel so bad, for having jumped this, really really bad!

So I immensly thank you for commenting, and gives you a special amount of *hugs and kisses*

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yutakai August 30 2009, 15:23:22 UTC
Hi dear ^^

I hope I'll get a good comment together cause I read all parts yesterday XD
Well I give it a try *lol*

Okay...I can write it again....POOR KAI!!!
Takeru is such a beast sometimes....and this after the happenings in the night...
I guess it never rains but it pours

Akira really is the big guardian...now he is also behind the Yuu/Takanori thing...
I actually wondered way Yuu helped Takanori *lol* now I know.
But I also have to blame you for a big laugh attack when I imagined Yuu in that typically Robin Hood outfit *lol*

I loved the scene where Shou just pulled Kai away from this scenery. Especially because I really didn't expect it from him.
Shou and fahter Byou must really have big hopes in Yutaka.
And the sheet of paper is just like a "To-do-list"
well two sins have already scratched...
GO KAI!!!

Thanks very much for this great chapter ^^
and see you on the next one

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luna_no_koibito August 31 2009, 22:06:41 UTC
(don't worry I am kind of a slutty writer ... AAY comments are acceptable LOL!)

Yeah that was definetely mean for Takeru to say such words, but he doesn't really care, in fact he had hoped to have left an impression on our poor apprentice *sighs*

Yeah AKira has NO LIFE whatsoever, and there is virtually a reason for everything that happens in this story, and I am still surprised Ruki hadn't found out about the whole deal with Yuu Yuu Hood I mean for real, picture that! LOL!

Ya, they do to have hopes in Yutaka, I think Shou is really really tired of it all. Thus, Yutaka will just have to get some strength and help that poor soul! LOL!
Yeah GO KAI!!!

You are welcome hon, and thank you so much for commenting as usual, I really appreciate it, really and gives you an ocean of *hugs and kisses* and of course see you on the next one!

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lisis_miyu August 30 2009, 19:45:07 UTC
I REALLY LOVE YOU!!!
You made a WONDERFULL work, so elaborated and good think that only with the tittle you made me kneel before you.
I love the whoooole history the good construction of the characters and the makeup, everything is perfect!! The best history that i had read latelly... I´m already addict T__T and even if I late chapters past and past to don´t be soooooooo nedeed when I finnish the acttual published, already failed jeje I gonna wait until the next chapter, that by the way I adoreeeeee that be soooo long *o*
Good work darling, keep working soo good until now
***Clapsss like crazy stand*****
I gonna add youuuu

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luna_no_koibito August 31 2009, 22:12:10 UTC
NEW READER *happy dance, bows honored* Man too many compliments all at ones! I am flabbergasted!
I am really glad that you like my story, and I'll try my best too keep it interesting and up beat!
And I'll try and work hard to give you guys a new chapter but I am a bit busy with school and life, BUT I'll do my best, promise (-_^!)

Thank you so much for commenting, I really appreciate it, gives you a universe of *hugs and kisses*

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k435y September 2 2009, 20:21:09 UTC
since he was one of the few people he felt at ease around, the others being Takanori, and now perhaps, Kazamasa I don't get why he should feel any unease around Shou... But Ruki?!~ Oh, gosh, he really is a Ruki-fanboy, eh? >__<;;

As for Yutaka, all he wanted to do was to quickly run away, before the lawyer could notice his presence LOL! Reita's not that...bad. =S

...I am not sure what happened with the scene where Reita and Takeru suddenly appears...as so does everyone else. What...in the world happened? Too many blondes and brunets~!!! O__O *dead*

he menacingly speed-walked towards Lady Ayaka, pulling his sleeves up, seemingly ready to deal with her LOL!!!! It's seriously weird how Ayaka and Yasuno are oblivious to everyone's raging emotions. XD

- Tell him Kazuhiro … - encouraged the taller brunette with a diverted smirk. I think you meant to type Ruki's name here instead of Bou's.

SHOU ran off with Kai?!! Amazing~ O_O

-So you are saying that I was really sent here, to take care of a bunch of crazies? - LOL! Pretty much, ( ... )

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luna_no_koibito September 10 2009, 20:21:07 UTC
[MAN THIS COME SO LATE BUT ...m(_ _)m ]

Yeah kind of fanboy ... or rather tends to associate with people on his same mentality level! Like studious and such (Yeah .. Shou is definitely not fierce or anything, but u'd agree with me that you'd probably won't feel comfy with someone, who never talks, and that could have a panic attack if accidentaly touched ...(^_^!!) )

They are basically fighting:
-Takeru and Akira appear
-Takahiro, Takanori, and the other twins, are in the yellow roses garden
-Yutaka, shou, and Kazuhiro are walking
-Yasuno and Ayaka. are in the garden in front of the other.
....LOL! A bit clearer?

Or not pretending that everything is fine ( ... )

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k435y September 10 2009, 21:35:55 UTC
Awww... You make me feel special. XD

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luna_no_koibito September 10 2009, 21:41:57 UTC
Dear ..u r! *hug*

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mesti September 8 2009, 10:13:54 UTC
kyaaaaaaaa! let me fangirling for few minutes XD
aww...kazamasa takes care of yutaka! for real! he, of all people..aww...i'm so proud of you, shou-chan <3 *hugs shou*
(well there's no takahiro around here, ne?lol)

but everything will be hard for takanori, i guess... yutaka-chan was no longer trusting him, right? poor ruki~..
and father byou played an important role in this chapter! yaaaay~...

you did an awesome job, dear <3
thanks for writing and sharing this fic ^^
you still made my day <3 *hugs*

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luna_no_koibito September 10 2009, 21:55:02 UTC
Lol fangirling!

Yes it will be, and it is the first time he is dealing with this type of situation, I kinda feel sorry for him as well ... but you'll see I guess ..

Thank you so much for always thanking the time to comment I really really appreciate it for real! LOVE! and I will give you so many years of *hugs and kisses*

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