I must say Kai is very amusing character, I really hope you have intended to make him that way because I can't help but laugh at his thoughts about Reita and once again at his behavior when they met again. But that is not all there is to him, I think you are doing a good job with his characterization. I like how you can feel that he isn't used to be in high society much and how he is unused to all the underlying actions in acts of the people around him. You can feel his discomfort. Takeru is really interesting too, he is a mischief and whatever might be his motives seeing him trying to seduce Kai is amusing. I think I would feel more sorry about Yasuno's fiance has she not seem to be just a vapid lady who cares only about social status. Reita was pure pleasure to see again. So far he is my favorite character, his work as a lawyer paints him in a different light than just a common brute. I do hope I am not wrong about him. I like him dangerous and on the edge but I hope he does have some code of behavior. Dogs are win again, just
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It is exactly how I meant him to be (and in fact, I was actually a little worried that he wouldn't appear so!), he is the only one that has this "Akira phobia" so he might look nonsensical to the rest of the viewers, thus, funny, and then again he has that aura of being uncomfortable, with various aspects of his new reality, he really is almost like a child out to explore on his own (I don't know if it makes sense ...(・＿・；；）) You are definitely not wrong about Reita, there is a lot to his character, which I will unfold, slowly ... and Ayaka, well, she doesn't mean any harm by it, but she is a little superficial though, and it is not entirely her fault either ... And, as I think I mentioned in another reply, I can see those two dogs running around like I owned them already, and they don't scare me, I actually think they might be kinda cute (^___^)
Thank you so much for commenting!! and I am glad you still interested in the story. *hugs and kisses*
And the plot thickens. Looks like Reita is more concerned with his brothers than he leads on...
Takeru and Yasuno are quite the pair xDDDD
And of course Bou would ignore the lady.... I feel that maybe he probably thinks she is trying to fill his shoes... Or..... really that she is only around for the money.... She seemed quick to name off all the things Yasuno owned... lol... greedy bitch .xD
Great chapter again..... *heading to the next one*
Yea Reita is definitely concerned with his brothers quite a lot, actually his brothers a pretty much a priority of his ...
Takeru and Yasuno are quite the pair, and wish they were also as easy (ahahah, wishful thinking ...they'll be a handful ...)
Yeah, well that's Ayaka, she herself born in a world of money, she is used to wealth, so ... intends to spend the rest of life in wealth as well. (^__^!!)
Thank you so much for the compliment, and I am so glad you are finding so interesting! Thanks a ton also for commenting *hugs and kisses*
The only thing I can say now is.... poor Yutaka <.< Reita will definitely make his life a living hell... lol he was too shocked when he met Kazuhiro XD
Yeah I will agree with you on that! Poor poor Yutaka. Reita will involuntarily make his life a living hell ... Yeah, didn't happen everyday to find a man in a dress LOL! THank you so much for commenting, gives you *hugs and kisses*
NO-- Yutaka met Kazuhiro!!! =O OMG!!! Ah, I ttl fail at comments today 8D I like so much Yutaka's characterisation. In fanfictions, Kai tends to be very ukeish and sweet, otherwise saidstic and cold-demeanored. I must admit "your" Yutaka looks interesting... I don't know how to say it, it's just very nice. I think I'll enjoy reading about him. For the other characters... uhm, I like Reita, for now and Saga and Tora, thankyouverymuch XD Miku has to be the cutest bartender ever, lol ...loving it but I have to leave again so I'll comment later or tomorrow DX damn life always gets in the way asdasdaasasdasdasdasdasdasd *collapses* XD thank you for this story!!!
Thank you again for the compliment hon! I really hope you'll enjoy reading about "this" Kai, he is very sweet, and unfortunaly kinda naive too, yeah, he is going to have it rough, but yey, I guess you'll figure it out (^_^!!) Reita and Miku have been two winners, (not as much as Tora and Saga though, that's for sure..lol!)
E non ti preoccupare, vai tra sul serio, qnd hai tempo!
Thank you so much for reading and commenitng, really appreciate it gives un chilo di *baci e abbracci*
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You are definitely not wrong about Reita, there is a lot to his character, which I will unfold, slowly ... and Ayaka, well, she doesn't mean any harm by it, but she is a little superficial though, and it is not entirely her fault either ...
And, as I think I mentioned in another reply, I can see those two dogs running around like I owned them already, and they don't scare me, I actually think they might be kinda cute (^___^)
Thank you so much for commenting!! and I am glad you still interested in the story. *hugs and kisses*
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Takeru and Yasuno are quite the pair xDDDD
And of course Bou would ignore the lady.... I feel that maybe he probably thinks she is trying to fill his shoes... Or..... really that she is only around for the money.... She seemed quick to name off all the things Yasuno owned... lol... greedy bitch .xD
Great chapter again..... *heading to the next one*
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Takeru and Yasuno are quite the pair, and wish they were also as easy (ahahah, wishful thinking ...they'll be a handful ...)
Yeah, well that's Ayaka, she herself born in a world of money, she is used to wealth, so ... intends to spend the rest of life in wealth as well. (^__^!!)
Thank you so much for the compliment, and I am so glad you are finding so interesting!
Thanks a ton also for commenting *hugs and kisses*
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Reita will definitely make his life a living hell...
lol he was too shocked when he met Kazuhiro XD
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Reita will involuntarily make his life a living hell ...
Yeah, didn't happen everyday to find a man in a dress LOL!
THank you so much for commenting, gives you *hugs and kisses*
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Ah, I ttl fail at comments today 8D
I like so much Yutaka's characterisation. In fanfictions, Kai tends to be very ukeish and sweet, otherwise saidstic and cold-demeanored. I must admit "your" Yutaka looks interesting... I don't know how to say it, it's just very nice. I think I'll enjoy reading about him.
For the other characters... uhm, I like Reita, for now and Saga and Tora, thankyouverymuch XD Miku has to be the cutest bartender ever, lol
...loving it but I have to leave again so I'll comment later or tomorrow DX damn life always gets in the way asdasdaasasdasdasdasdasdasd *collapses*
XD thank you for this story!!!
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I really hope you'll enjoy reading about "this" Kai, he is very sweet, and unfortunaly kinda naive too, yeah, he is going to have it rough, but yey, I guess you'll figure it out (^_^!!)
Reita and Miku have been two winners, (not as much as Tora and Saga though, that's for sure..lol!)
E non ti preoccupare, vai tra sul serio, qnd hai tempo!
Thank you so much for reading and commenitng, really appreciate it gives un chilo di *baci e abbracci*
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