Protection - A Kakashi/Naruto (non-romantic) Fanfic

[lumoslumiere]

Wow, i'm a role. This one came to me 3 days ago and wouldn't leave me alone. So here we go!

Tittle: Protection
Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: Kakashi/Naruto (non-romantic! no yaoi!)
Rating: PG
Warning: Not yaoi!
Disclaimer: I own nothing. The world of Naruto belongs to Kishimoto-sensei. I just borrow. :)
Author's Notes: Unbeta-ed, please excuse grammatical

Comments

[seizansha]

wow! we all know kakashi's gonna be the one that naruto's really gonna open up to whenever he finds out; and i really love how you covered it, one of those rare moments where he's just a kid.

p.s. ^^' you need to edit this. you've got the itallized/conversation stuck inside the first paragraph.

[helike]

A very nicely written story :) Good job :)
And yeah... you might want to re-edit it a bit ;)

[lumoslumiere]

Thank you! ^_^
Sorry about the error, it's been edited. :D

[fotoshop_cutout]

Well done ♥

you may want to touch up "reach" should be "react" in the seventh paragraph.

Good job, though!

[hatakekakashi29]

Nice work, I knew that in a way or another, Naruto will be good with Kakashi or Jiraiya since they are inter-related in a way..