Fireworks - An Ichigo/Rukia Fic

[lumoslumiere]

This is my first fic in the Bleach fandom, but I've already written a few more. I love Ichigo and Rukia, but really, who doesn't? This story comes late again, as I wrote it for New Year's, but still I like how it turned out. Once more, please excuse any grammatical errors.

Tittle: Fireworks
Fandom: Bleach
Pairing: Ichigo/Rukia
Rating: PG
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Comments

[sodanielle]

ah, that was cute! aside from the random typo (though you have an excuse) it was a great first attempt.

i hope you write more soon!

[lumoslumiere]

Thank you very much. ^_^

[jassmine_black]

Yay! Kissing! For some reason I've only ever come across fics where Ichigo and Rukia argue with each other, think about each other, or are involved in some serious crack. Therefore, I'm thrilled that there was some action between the two here! I hope you write more ^_^

[lumoslumiere]

Hehe, yeah, it's hard to find some good fluffy IchiRuki fics. :)

[artemis_obscure]

It is quite pretty. I like the idea of Ichigo and Rukia watching fireworks.
And LOL. Isshin and his 'daddy' comments! Wonderful!

[lumoslumiere]

Thanks very much. I love Isshin, I just had to put him in there. ^_^

[lurliene]

awww that was really cute! :3 very fluffy and nicely done
and if you're looking for a beta reader, i'm available :)

[lumoslumiere]

Thanks very much. If you're interested you can contact me at lumos_creativity@hotmail.com :)

[tasogaretaichou]

Awww, v. adorable. As much fun as it is to see them arguing and bickering like normal, I love to see them in quieter moments, between the arguing. Especially in an instance where Ichigo is teaching her something about the human world. With the exception of his near-eternal snarkiness, it's times like that that he seems the most tolerant and easy-going with her, and you brought that out v. well. Nice job.

[lumoslumiere]

Thank You. I agree, they must have some peaceful moments every once in a while. ^_^

[tasogaretaichou]

Agreed.