Wake - Chapter 7: Wake up Dreaming

[luminous_vibe]

Fandom: Alice Nine
Pairings: ToraxSaga
Genre: Angst, Crackish (at times), Drama, Romance, Suspense,
Rating: R
Warnings: Psychological Screwiness, a lot of it.
Summary: As the days fade, time marches onward. Or so it seems. Is this life real? Does it matter? Is anything real… or is it just a dream?

Disclaimer: I don’t claim to see the future, know

Comments

[silveryxdark]

Halfway through this, I began crying, because I was so worried for them, but at the same time I was really touched by how much Saga loves Tora, and how Tora finally realises it in the end. I hope they will both be alright, and oh, it was such an amazing read, honestly. I can't wait for the next chapter~ Don't stress yourself out though! ♥

[luminous_vibe]

:O Don't worry about them too much! I love these guys too much to do anything incredibly bad to them ^.^ I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. Thank you for reading and commenting. The next one is coming soon.

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P.S. How do you make the little heart? I can't figure it out. o.o

[luminous_vibe]

Bah! Proper comment nothing, the fact that you enjoyed reading enough to comment at all is what makes my day. Thanks so much for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it ^.^ The next one is almost done so I hope you enjoy the ending.

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[blindcottonlove]

Far off, he heard raised voices echoing from the back of his mind. He centered his attention on Saga as the door to the hospital room slammed open, brought his other hand up to cup his lover’s cheek as Shou and Hiroto came tumbling into the room followed by some hospital workers, all flickering and melting at Shou had done before.

“Time’s up I guess.” Tora breathed. Just as the unknown workers reached out to try and grab them Tora closed the scarce inches between them and covered Saga’s lips with his.

I loved the whole chapter but that specific part was somehow magical -I was actually able to live it through with Tora, see the whole thing happening around me. Impeccable writing, once again :D The load of emotions you've managed to write into the story is just mindblowing!

[luminous_vibe]

Ah, that part ^.^ *blush* I think I rewrote that little scene five times or something to get it just so. I'm glad you like it ^.^ Thank you so much for reading and commenting, I'm happy you've enjoyed the story so far.

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amazing

[gacktx]

i love this story . please wright the last one quickly .. amazing i so did not expect tora to be the one sleeping :O wake up tora !!!

Re: amazing

[luminous_vibe]

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far ^.^ The next one will be along soon, I hope you like it.

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[maunetjeret]

This was amazing. I got all teary eyed when Shou said Saga had died, but that also helped reinforce the fact that it was Tora who was "sleeping". It was so beautiful... When he told Saga he was the only memory that was real, OMG! Aikihdjfufhruie I spazzed. I am sad this story is ending but I can't wait for the next chapter. You really wrote something beautiful, I hope you know. <33

[luminous_vibe]

Thank you! Awww, thank you thank you ^.^ You make me blush. I'm glad you enjoy it, and that you find it beautiful. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. The next one is almost done.

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