Wake - Chapter 2: Straight Shot

[luminous_vibe]

Band: Alice Nine
Pairings: ToraxSaga
Genre: Angst, Crackish (at times), Drama, Romance, Suspense,
Rating: R
Warnings: Psychological Screwiness, a lot of it.
Summary: As the days fade, time marches onward. Or so it seems. Is this life real? Does it matter? Is anything real… or is it just a dream?

Disclaimer: I don’t claim to see the future,

Comments

[maunetjeret]

I was relieved to see Tora is okay. However, I was so anxious just waiting for them to spit out the information on Saga's condition. Glad to know he's alive, at least. I wasn't so sure that would be the case, ya know? I would have to agree with you, the whole operating room scene was a bit... Disturbing and freaky. I can't wait for the next update. This is going to play so many mind games with me, I love it.

[luminous_vibe]

Yes, Tora is okay... so far. He's going to have some fun coming up but for now he's okay ^.^ Saga is alive! Good things yes? All good things for now. Also, sorry! >_< I didn't mean to make it so scary and then I wrote it and read back over it and thought 'wow that's... terrifying...'

There's going to be a healthy mix of worry and happy in here so I'm glad you've decided to continue reading and I hope you enjoy the rest of it. It's good you enjoy mind games because there's going to be more of that later. Lots more ^.^

Thanks for reading! <3

[erikaoi]

Omg.saga,poor saga.i totally dun find its creeping.sumtime it happen to ppl being injured bad.their soul sumhow being out of their body.doing that theiy desire that can’t be done.when tora sees saga open their eyes,its shows saga really love him&its powerfull enough that tora can see his soul.and its happening bcoz tora wished that too.well thats my point of view.continue please..can’t wait for next thing to happen

[luminous_vibe]

Thank you for reading! ^.^ I can't tell you what's actually happening with Saga yet, but you've got an interesting theory there. Is that really a phenomena? Cool. Anyway, I'm glad you're enjoying it, the next part will be here soon ^.^

[erikaoi]

i duno if it can be called phenomena but ijust heard and whatch some drama about it.....okay...update soon..hehehe

[silveryxdark]

Whoa, that was... scary. Like, terrified-that-Saga's-dead scary. But I'm glad that both Tora and Saga are fine... well, sort of fine, for Saga, I guess? Ahihi 'ghost' Saga will be very interesting <3

[luminous_vibe]

Ahhh, if you know anything about my writing, you know 'fine' is a relative term. But yes, for now you could call them both fine. ^.^ I'm hoping you'll stay interested so thanks for reading and commenting, the next one will be here eventually ^.^

[sumikatara]

There are a lot of mixed emotions in this chapter.

You got me quite worried but I'm really liking this story so far.

You creeped yourself out? I know how that feels when you write something and at the time you're writing it you don't think about but after you're in the situation you explained (with the being alone in the silent house) and even though you're glad you wrote it you really wish you hadn't because it freaks you out. It's like the house is just out to get you! Evil houses...

Anyway, I'll shut up now! Great chapter, really looking forward to the next:)

[luminous_vibe]

Thank you for reading! ^.^ I'm glad you're enjoying it so far but don't worry too much now, there's still more coming.

It was funny because usually I write vampire stories so I didn't think it was going to be bad... and then it was. >_<

No please, talk all you want ^.^ I love people who talk a lot. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, the next part will be up soon. <3

[sumikatara]

I'll keep looking out for the next part then, I was a bit late with this chapter...just a little, but still.

I understand that...I tend to creep myself out a lot without realising I'm going to but when you've finished writing it, it's already too late.

It had the same effect when I was reading it the second time and it was really dark and silent and it was quite creepy because I had this image of Saga like that in my head and I could see it really clearly. Even though I knew it was going to happen because I'd already read it before. Never thought Saga could be scary...at least you now know you write well enough for your readers to be able to get the imagery even if it does freak them out.

It's a good thing you like people who talk a lot because I do, or rather write a lot because I don't talk much at all but when I'm writing, sometimes I just don't know when to stop!

[luminous_vibe]

Thank you!!! ^.^ I'm so glad you're enjoying it, thank you so much. I'm sorry the next chapter isn't up yet, I've been having technical problems all day. >_> It'll be here soon though so thank you for reading and have a nice day!!! <3