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Zatanna's Surprise

Mar 31, 2011 04:02

Title: Zatanna’s Surprise

Summary: Zatanna promised Oliver his deepest desire if he would get her father’s book. But he never asked her to fulfill that promise. Little does Oliver know that Zatanna is not the type to back out of her promises and that she is only waiting for the right time and the right wish to fulfill.

Rating: PG

Warnings: ( Read more... )

fanfic: zatanna's surprise, oneshot, fandom: smallville, pairing: chlollie

Comments 11

jediyoda99 March 31 2011, 05:38:23 UTC

That was a good sequel. I like that Zatanna and John too the matters in their hands withour really interfering.

luminare91 April 2 2011, 02:31:18 UTC

I just always thought that with the roadblocks Chloe kept throwing up that it would take some major outside influence to get them together. Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you liked it.

genki_geek March 31 2011, 05:46:40 UTC

Awww. Thanks for this! Zee's a particular favorite of mine and seeing her in this homey atmosphere with the rest of the League made me smile :)

luminare91 April 2 2011, 02:32:47 UTC

Zee's one of the characters that I don't think got enough screen time. I've always loved her, but when she was on screen, I got the feeling that she wasn't really part of the group, which is just plain sad. Hence this fic. Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it.

greenteam4ever March 31 2011, 17:46:43 UTC

It is a really good idea that Zee & J'onn helped them to see the obvious. Nice fic, thanks, I enjoyed reading :)

luminare91 April 2 2011, 02:35:18 UTC

Chloe and Oliver have both always been oblivious to their own feelings. I liked the idea of someone else looking out for them. It was just a fun idea. I'm glad you liked it.

nienna87 March 31 2011, 19:46:25 UTC

Nice! We always talked about how Zatanna was the reason Chlollie got together...its nice to see a fic about it. Great sequel too btw :) Awesome job on this. Loved that Zee roped J'onn into helping her. Lovely!

luminare91 April 2 2011, 02:39:11 UTC

J'onn was the only person that I thought she could convince to be her inside man. Plus, he always seemed to really care about everyone. That and I just liked the idea of Zatanna being the mastermind behind Chlollie.

starry_laa April 1 2011, 23:24:45 UTC

This fic was lovely. I loved Zatanna's hand in helping the Chlollie relationship.

luminare91 April 2 2011, 02:39:33 UTC

Thank you!!