Comments | luminare91: Gift of Fate Chapter 14 (15/?)

luminare91

Gift of Fate Chapter 14 (15/?)

May 30, 2011 11:43

Summary: Oliver has been missing for two years, ever since his boat went down in a sudden storm. Chloe is still grieving for him. What will it take for her to move on and live her life again? What happened to Oliver? Will he ever come back? And who's behind the mysterious disappearances in Star City?

Rating: PG-13 for the most part, however there ( Read more... )

verse: fate, mutlichapter, fanfic: gift of fate, pairing: chlollie

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luminare91 May 30 2011, 18:57:00 UTC

Hopefully as much fun as I'm having writing it :)

Thanks for the review!!!

saurina May 30 2011, 18:08:56 UTC

I love Hal, he's so fun and speaks his mind. Ohh and knowing that playful mind of his, I'll bet he'll have fun teasing the two lovebirds with his knowledge of their secret personas lol!

Now the plot thickens, Chloe have connected the dots and I can't wait to see, how she'll get hold of him.

Another amazing chapter, I love how in details, you tell the story. For instance the part about how Oliver previously had to dispose of bloody things, so noone would trace it back to him. I may be nitpicking, but it's a thing most writers forget about and that's not good when their identities are supposed to be a secret, right LOL!!

luminare91 May 30 2011, 19:10:04 UTC

I love Hal, too. I haven't seen him in much besides fics I've read in this fandom. Though based on what I have seen, he seems pretty awesome. And he is definitely never going to let the lovebirds live down how easy it was to figure out their alter egos.

Yeah, getting a hold of him is definitely going to be fun :)

It never ceases to amaze me how well you get my writing. You seem to notice everything, which as an author is really amazing. For me, it's all about getting inside the characters heads. In that moment, that what I saw Oliver thinking. I think it's important to give the stupid little details that seem to have no bearing on the actual story like, but I think it helps give insight into the characters. The fact that you notice and appreciate that is immensely gratifying and amazing. So thank you!

icanti May 30 2011, 18:23:10 UTC

I love Hal Jordan! Best green lantern ever! And like always, your story it's amazing.

luminare91 May 30 2011, 19:11:12 UTC

Thank you!! It's always nice to hear that!

liselle2010 May 30 2011, 18:48:25 UTC

I am on vacation in San Antonio and I can't tell you how thrilled I was to have a new part. Something to do until the sun goes down and the heat gets bearable.

I absolutely love your Hal!

luminare91 May 30 2011, 19:12:46 UTC

Lol, I know exactly how hot it gets in Texas. I'm glad I could relieve the boredom!

Thanks for the review!

chlollielover May 30 2011, 23:37:03 UTC

I love it so much. And since I love Green Lantern as much as I love Green Arrow is always exciting to read about him. :D

This is getting sooo good. Now, what's Chloe's idea? Eheh.

Can't wait for the next one.

luminare91 May 31 2011, 00:02:54 UTC

Chloe's idea is something that Oliver will definitely not like, let's just say that :P

Thank you for the comment. The next chapter will be up as soon as possible!