Gift of Fate Chapter 13 (14/?)

[luminare91]

Summary: Oliver has been missing for two years, ever since his boat went down in a sudden storm. Chloe is still grieving for him. What will it take for her to move on and live her life again? What happened to Oliver? Will he ever come back? And who's behind the mysterious disappearances in Star City?

Comments

[saurina]

That was absolutely the most amazing piece of smut writing, I have ever read. It was sweet and hot and totally endearing

[luminare91]

That is some seriously high praise. I think I'm actually speechless.

You totally got everything I was trying to say. I never thought of calling Oliver a virgin. But you're right. This was the first time he made love instead of having sex. You are brilliant for noticing that. I'm so glad that this turned out well!!

I couldn't resist adding in Clark and Lois. Because this has all taken place in another city, we haven't really gotten to see them. I swear, it's almost like you're inside my head because you seem to know exactly where this is going with certain superpowered people. The JL will make an appearance soon. These next few chapters are going to be action packed.

And I think you mentioned that you love this fic. But thanks for mentioning it again. You're comments throughout this entire thing have been wonderful.

[greenteam4ever]

I'm so happy they are finally together! Really, I love it when they are. Can't agree more - every line showed how much they love each other..they are just perfect, you did amazing job!I liked the chapter as always. Keep going! Chloe's talk with Lois was incredible!LoL
Thanks for the chapter, I hope your move will go ok. Looking forward for the next chapter

[luminare91]

Thank you so much! You have no idea how much it helps to know that you think I'm doing a good job with this.

After this, there will be more interaction between Chlollie and the other Smallville characters we all know and love, but I had to throw in some Chlo-Lo, because I honestly missed writing it.

Hopefully the move will go easily. Thanks for the well wishes. I'll try to get the next chapter up as soon as I can with everything going on.

[chlollielover]

Their first time was perfect! I want an Ollie *.*
Love it so so so so so much <3

[luminare91]

I want an Ollie, too. I think we all do. Unfortunately, we have to settle for fanfiction, smut, and our own imaginations, lol.

Thanks so much for the review. I'm happy you enjoyed it~

[ouchaalicious]

are you kidding me ? you are so underestimate yourself, lady. T h i s. is the most lovely smut scene I've ever read ! *melting* (•̯͡.•̯͡)
Its her very first time and Ollie's caring and worry makes it tremendously perfect. *melting again*

great chapter *as always* ! can't wait for the next. and just don't make us wait too long ! ;)

[luminare91]

You know, I think I'm finally understanding that. Second guessing myself is something I'm working on, but it's been harder than I thought. So, I'm really glad that you think I did so well.

I had more time to write this week than I thought I would, so as soon as the next chapter is edited, it'll be up.

Thanks for the review!

[modscho]

Wow, what an amazing chapter - totally loved it!
Do stop worrying, you're a natural smut writer! This wasn't just about some fun in the sheets, that was pure love, so tender, so caring and I just melted away. I don't mind reading some hot steamy sex scene at all, but this was so much better in many ways - perfect, really.

[luminare91]

Thank you, so much. You totally were I was going with this. That was what I was worried about. I wasn't sure if I'd managed to balance the smut with the emotions. So I'm glad that I seemed to melt so many people, lol.

The review is really very much appreciated. I think I'm still blushing :)