Fading Scars

[luminare91]

Title: Fading Scars

Rating: PG. Some mature themes and mild language. Nothing too serious though at this point in the fic.

Summary: Chloe keeps vigil at Oliver's bedside, trying to deal with her emotions, after he is branded by Zod. Will she be afraid of what she's feeling or will she embrace it?

Warning: None at this point in time, but I only have a

Comments

[iluvaqt]

You captured the enormity of his situation, the status of Watchtower and what Chloe would have been going through at the time perfectly. I love that Emil surmised their relationship and how to get Chloe to cooperate, as Bart probably suspects something too :D But realizes that he probably never stood a chance. There are no two people more alike that Chloe and Ollie :)

Well done, loved this Offscreensville look at Chlollie from that ep. Looking forward to the road to recovery and that 'talk'

[luminare91]

The writer's left so much of Chlollie's relationship to offscreensville, I thought I'd try my hand at filling out my blanks. I'm glad you think I'm going in the right direction. I'll try to get the next part up soon, but this is my first attempt at posting two fics at once, so we'll see how that goes :)

[ladygormengast]

You really need to keep writing! This is what I missed and wanted to see in the episode when Oliver was in the hospital.

[luminare91]

There will be at least one more chapter where Oliver is more coherent. I'm just not sure if I'll continue beyond that. I'll just have to see where it takes me.

[auntyk]

I like the idea of a couple more chapters seen at various stages of recovery with the last at 100%.....I'm just sayin' :)

[luminare91]

we'll just see where it goes. at the moment, i'm only planning one more chapter, but it just depends on where that chapter ends up. I like the idea of writing about Oliver's entire recovery, though, so I'll definitely see if I can work something out.

[luminare91]

Thank you! When I stumbled across this on my laptop, I decided that since we finally know what happens to Chlollie that it would be run to revisit how they came to be, especially since so much of their relationship is left to us. I'm glad you like it!

[milen748]

aww he doesn´t want to sleep :P

[luminare91]

I actually got that idea from my sister. She got put under some anesthesia a few years ago and when she woke up she kinda kept regressing age wise. I thought it would be fun to see Oliver a little more vulnerable and it was the perfect way to hint at his feelings.

[milen748]

i understand! i was watching something with my mom and then she said something and i was like... that´s totally cool i could write about that but then i went to sleep and i can´t remember now!!! im so frustrated still your fic rocks! <3

[luminare91]

I hate it when that happens! Usually I get my best ideas when I'm falling asleep and then I have to try to remember when i get up the next morning. So many good idea have been lost to sleep, lol

I vote for more chapters!!!

[voz_76]

When I first watched the episode Sacrifice, I felt cheated that they didn't have more scenes of Chloe and Oliver. I love that you are giving us a behind the scenes look of what could have happened in that episode. Please continue to add more chapters, I love the tone of your fic (how stubborn Chloe is, how Emil knows that and wasn't going to suggest her leaving but bringing in a cot for her to sleep in :-D, how Oliver needs to be as near to her as possible even in sleep) and although it hasn't been that long since the series finale, I am going through withdraw, so please add the chapters as soon as you can - LOL!

Re: I vote for more chapters!!!

[luminare91]

Well, as you can tell, I felt the same way about Sacrifice. I'm so glad you like this and that my characterizations work for you. You are not the only one going through withdrawal already. This is my guilty pleasure!